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As an Orphan Chapter 1 (Poll is to decide to continue)

Posted: 10 Apr 2014, 20:46
by AuroraBorealis
(Removed.)

As an Orphan Chapter 1 (Poll is to decide to continue)

Posted: 10 Apr 2014, 22:06
by AuroraBorealis
OK, so the first chapter is pretty boring. But this is my just first story.
Any suggestions would be widely appreciated!
I'm not continuing because no one seemed to like it. Thanks for your time!

As an Orphan Chapter 1 (Poll is to decide to continue)

Posted: 11 Apr 2014, 22:44
by Lageos
It is a good story, keep it up!

As an Orphan Chapter 1 (Poll is to decide to continue)

Posted: 12 Apr 2014, 10:39
by AuroraBorealis
Thanks! I might! :D

As an Orphan Chapter 1 (Poll is to decide to continue)

Posted: 16 May 2014, 15:40
by Hope_and_Heir
I was gonna read it DX

As an Orphan Chapter 1 (Poll is to decide to continue)

Posted: 16 May 2014, 16:11
by AuroraBorealis
Eh... it was just a practice writing, I'm still not very good...