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When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 28 May 2014, 18:34
by Shnuckles
Well, here's chapter one in my new story! Tell me what you think!

When We Were Younger

When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 28 May 2014, 21:20
by draconicwyvern
Bravo!

*claps*

That was fascinating to read! The fanfic's turning out great!

*applause*

Keep it up! ^_^


When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 28 May 2014, 21:22
by Hope_and_Heir
*loud applause*

When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 28 May 2014, 21:24
by Shnuckles
cometotheberkside
29 May 2014, 01:20
Bravo!

*claps*

That was fascinating to read! The fanfic's turning out great!

*applause*

Keep it up! ^_^
Hope_and_Heir
29 May 2014, 01:22
*loud applause*
Glad you guys liked it! There is still a lot more to come!

When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 28 May 2014, 21:24
by draconicwyvern
*standing ovation*

When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 29 May 2014, 15:24
by Shnuckles
cometotheberkside
29 May 2014, 01:24
*standing ovation*
Thank you! I'm working on chapter 2 as I type this!


When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 04 Jun 2014, 15:43
by Shnuckles
Chapter 2! I love this chapter so much! I think it is one of my best! Well, I'll let you guys be the judge of that. I did put a couple italic text in here, but it won't show up for you guys because I'll have to go back and find out where I put them, then do it manually and blablabla XP. Anyway, here we go!
Chapter 2

When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 04 Jun 2014, 16:05
by draconicwyvern
Oh wow.

Beautiful writing. You captured the essence of the scene perfectly.

It is definitely your best ;)

When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 04 Jun 2014, 16:24
by Hope_and_Heir
:0 awesome

When We Were Younger (CH.2 UP!)

Posted: 07 Jun 2014, 02:28
by draco
Awesome chapters
Well done. Can't wait to read more.