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This is my first story about the Vikings! In the story, Hiccup and Astrid have a son! This will be a oneshot, unless you want me to carry on with it!
"Dad, I'm going out.' Hiccup The Fourth said to his father.
"OK, son, just be careful...' Hiccup worried about his son, as did Stoick, his late father.
"I will.' Hiccup opened the door.
"Wait- you can go out, if Toothless comes with you.'
"Dad, I'm thirteen! I'm old enough to go out without being babysitted by a dragon!'
Toothless snorted at being called 'a dragon'.
Hiccup ran outside, pretending not to hear his father's shouts.
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Don't worry! This isn't the end! Let me know if I should carry on.

Nice. You should continue!

cometotheberkside

10 Jun 2014, 20:24

Nice. You should continue!

I will!

Update:
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Hiccup The Fourth ran down the grassy hill from the Chief's house. Suddenly, he felt himself being lifted off the ground. For a second, he panicked.
"AHHHHH!!! TOOTHLESS?! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?'
The Night Fury flew over to a sea-stack, and dropped Hiccup onto it, upright. Once he had recovered from his unexpected flight, the boy stroked Toothless. The dragon shook his hand off.
"Toothless? What's wrong?' Usually, when Toothless acted like this, something very bad was about to happen.
Toothless gestured with his head to The Woods That Howled.
Hiccup climbed onto Toothless's back, and flew off.
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"Hiccup's been gone for ages.' observed his father.
"I'm sure he's fine.' Astrid assured her husband.
"I'm going to check what he's up to. Skullcrusher!'
The Rumblehorn came to his dead master's son's side.
"Hiccup, I don't think you need to take Skullcrusher.'
"It's what my father-'
Tears came to his eyes as thought of how Stoick was killed.
'-would have done.' he finished.
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*claps*
Continue on! Great start!

cometotheberkside

10 Jun 2014, 21:02

*claps*
Continue on! Great start!

Did you like the bit at the end?

Toothless123

10 Jun 2014, 21:03

cometotheberkside

10 Jun 2014, 21:02

*claps*
Continue on! Great start!

Did you like the bit at the end?

Yep Very mysterious! *cue scary music here*

But I'm wondering, does this oneshot contain any spoilers? (I don't mind if they do, I'm just curious since it is after HTTYD2 B-) )

I have an OC that's Hiccup's son too. He has the exact same name. The only difference is that his mom isn't Astrid it's my OC Freyja.

cometotheberkside

10 Jun 2014, 21:11

Toothless123

10 Jun 2014, 21:03

cometotheberkside

10 Jun 2014, 21:02

*claps*
Continue on! Great start!

Did you like the bit at the end?

Yep Very mysterious! *cue scary music here*

But I'm wondering, does this oneshot contain any spoilers? (I don't mind if they do, I'm just curious since it is after HTTYD2 B-) )

Well, the bit about is a spoiler, so yes, it does.

Update:
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"Come on, Toothless.' The Night Fury followed obediently behind me.
"ROOOOOAAAAARRRRRR!'
"What was that, Toothless?' I asked him.
He growled at the direction the roar came from. Then, he flew off.
"Hey! Toothless! Where are you going?!'
I ran to catch up with him. Eventually, I came to where Toothless was. He jumped in front of me, almost as if he was trying to hide something.
I tried to get past him, but he continued growling.
"Son!'
"Dad!'
I saw my father flying towards us on Skullcrusher.
"Son, what's-'
He turned as pale as the snow around us.
"Dad? What is it?'
My father ignored me. "No. No .'
"Go and get the others. Now.'
"But, Dad-'
"GO!" he ordered.
Reluctantly, I ran back to the village.
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