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Short Fanfic, Little Scauldron

Posted: 21 Jun 2014, 03:58
by SplashTheScauldron
I don't know where I got this idea from ^_^
Sooo... what do you think? And if there is a mistake, can you say it please? I have tried my best, but maybe there are still a few...

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„Please Mom! I won't be away for very long!“

„Okay, but watch out for the Seashockers and don't be late for dinner!“

I swim fast out of our cave. Soon, I will be the fastest Scauldron of the northern seas! Next to me swims a little flock of green fish. I will ask Mom later if I can eat one. The evening sun reflects beautifully on the waves, seagulls circle over the water. I dive down, spread my little ocean-blue wings and do a backflip. The world tilts upside down and I roar luckily. The dragons on land don't know what they miss! I accelerate, break through the surface and jump like a dolphin. For a few seconds I see the world over the surface, another world, not like the colorful reefs and the ruff cliffs down here.
It will be night soon, the hunting time of the Seashockers.

„Just wait a few years, Seashockers! Then I'll be a big and strong Scauldron who doesn't need to hide from you! Just wait!“ ,I roar.

Then I turn around, up north, to my parents.

Short Fanfic, Little Scauldron

Posted: 21 Jun 2014, 08:34
by draconicwyvern
Aww, I love it very much!

Usually I don't like to point out mistakes. Makes me feel bad. -_- But here they are anyways.
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Anyways, that was a sweet story :3

Short Fanfic, Little Scauldron

Posted: 21 Jun 2014, 09:08
by SplashTheScauldron
cometotheberkside
21 Jun 2014, 12:34
Aww, I love it very much!

Usually I don't like to point out mistakes. Makes me feel bad. -_- But here they are anyways.
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Anyways, that was a sweet story :3
Lol, typical german mistakes XD

But thank you cometotheberkside :)

Short Fanfic, Little Scauldron

Posted: 21 Jun 2014, 10:29
by draconicwyvern
Really sorry :(
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Short Fanfic, Little Scauldron

Posted: 21 Jun 2014, 16:10
by Shemrocky
Very nice!!!! :D And I dont care about mistakes^^ just enjoy the fanfics :)

Short Fanfic, Little Scauldron

Posted: 22 Jun 2014, 05:13
by SplashTheScauldron
cometotheberkside
21 Jun 2014, 14:29
Really sorry :(
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Hey, Its okay ^^

Short Fanfic, Little Scauldron

Posted: 22 Jun 2014, 05:15
by SplashTheScauldron
Shemrocky
21 Jun 2014, 20:10
Very nice!!!! :D And I dont care about mistakes^^ just enjoy the fanfics :)
Thanks Shemy :wub: