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Grief post sequel story.
Posted: 25 Jun 2014, 03:51
by Rocky Rose
Okay- so I found myself writing, for once not just writing a random scene here and there but... I have post HTTYD2 Snoggletog story in the works, (I must be back in my writing game again, and honestly, it's been a while since I could really say that about Any of my writing)
WARNING-
MAJOR SPOILERS UNDER SPOILER TAG... DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU"VE SEEN HTTYD2
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The "____ " part is where I couldn't find the word to describe Toothless..
and I surprised myself with how detailed this is....I just have to be hitting the soundtrack's music for this....cue the feels
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Hiccup
(Nightmare)
I stood there, in a feeble attempt to reason with Drago Bludfist. Toothless’ eyes changed from the normal happy round curious black _________ that I had grown to love for all of five years, to mere slits .
“What did he say to you?” I asked, in disbelief of what was happening as Toothless tried to shake off the bad bewilderbeast’s control. But, it was already too late.
“Come on, snap out of it!” I desperately demanded. Toothless’ plasma blue glow ready to deliver the fatal blast.
I saw Dad running toward me, desperate to get me out of danger.
“Dad, no!” I yelled out as he pushed me out of the way.
It was done; my world was crashing around me.
“No,” I got up and desperately tried to turn my father’s limp form.
“No, Stoick!” Mom cried, not hearing a heartbeat from her husband.
Toothless had snapped out of it when my world was now completely shattered. He tried to nudge at dad, but all I could feel was the pain from what he…no really, Drago and his bewilderbeast had done…
"Get away from him!!" I yelled at Toothless in anger and grief...
" You know it wasn't his fault," Mom gently reasoned with the sane part of my mind, but it was too late. Next thing I know he was being taken by Drago..
"Toothless!!" I ran away from the scene of it all, but Mom held me back from going farther.
“Good dragons under the control of bad people do bad things...”
I shot the flaming arrow into the air…
“I'm sorry dad, I'm not the chief you wanted me to be and I'm not the peacekeeper I thought I was... I... Don't know...”
I found myself on the ground, again-breathing heavily, just after that devastating moment, when Berk lost one of its greatest chiefs
The world around me spun, blurred to no recognition.
(End Chapter ish)
Grief post sequel story.
Posted: 25 Jun 2014, 04:10
by Hope_and_Heir
I thoroughly enjoyed the feels and description in that *choking sob*
Maybe the blank word (____) could be 'pupils'. That's what my mind filled in. *le shrug*
Grief post sequel story.
Posted: 25 Jun 2014, 04:53
by Rocky Rose
- Hope_and_Heir
- 25 Jun 2014, 08:10
I thoroughly enjoyed the feels and description in that *choking sob*
Maybe the blank word (____) could be 'pupils'. That's what my mind filled in. *le shrug*
I'm gonna go with that and see how it works
that might be just the word I was looking for..
my mind was originally thinking "balls...circles..." yours makes alot of sense for it..
Grief post sequel story.
Posted: 25 Jun 2014, 05:14
by Hope_and_Heir
- Rocky Rose
- 25 Jun 2014, 08:53
- Hope_and_Heir
- 25 Jun 2014, 08:10
I thoroughly enjoyed the feels and description in that *choking sob*
Maybe the blank word (____) could be 'pupils'. That's what my mind filled in. *le shrug*
I'm gonna go with that and see how it works
that might be just the word I was looking for..
my mind was originally thinking "balls...circles..." yours makes alot of sense for it..
Glad I was able to help
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Posted: 25 Jun 2014, 09:04
by draconicwyvern
I just watch the sequel yesterday, and honestly I think you just brought back the feels. Great work!
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Posted: 25 Jun 2014, 10:45
by The Norse Nerd
That perfectly describes the scene. I feel so bad for Hiccup, when I watched the movie I wanted to jump into the screen and hug him
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Posted: 25 Jun 2014, 12:59
by Rocky Rose
Thanks for the awesome reviews guys... I believe I've made myself cry just writing more of this story alone
I wrote like a ton before I went to sleep- all I have to do is add it onto my Word document of it and re-format it because when I copy and paste from my iPod notes, it looses the formatting midway...
So I'm actually going to update at some point either today or tomorrow, you guys are an awesome bunch to run this story past while it's still WIP
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Posted: 25 Jun 2014, 23:33
by Rocky Rose
The gods hate me
my computer managed to get a virus this afternoon
so idk when I'll be able to update
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Posted: 26 Jun 2014, 00:18
by WasBornCrazy
o.O
Grief post sequel story.
Posted: 26 Jun 2014, 01:11
by Rocky Rose
Okay.. I m gonna make this update a small one, because I can still
Use my laptop... I'm having the pros look at it tomorrow at the Nerd Herd... (ok- really it's a local computer place- but I like referencing shows I like
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a REALLY short bit from the beginning.. and same warning for Spoilers...
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Hiccup
I felt the tightness in my chest as if I had breathed in some smoke or something, but I was around smoke and fire all the time between dragons and Gobber's smithy, so this didn’t make any sense. I shook it off as stress from being overwhelmed as the new chief of Berk.
"Lookin a little pale today eh, Hiccup?"
"I'm fine, I think.." It was a cold day in Berk, but I felt like a bewilderbeast's icy breath was more inside of me then outside. Under my heavier winter furs, I still felt a chill.
"One order for a new saddle.."
I began to draw the pattern for the saddle, when a wave of dizziness hit me without warning. The heat from the kiln was close but, it was as if our 'devastating winter' took hold within me.
I have a ton more typed out but I don't trust my laptop...
