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Toothless123
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13 Jul 2014, 14:18
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Night Fury
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- Fireproof - Chapter One: The Meeting
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"I have called a meeting today, for a important thing.'
"A-and what might that important thing be, sir?'
'I am going to murder the dragon that took my arm.'
A look of uncertainty came over my soldiers' faces.
'Do any of you have a...problem with that...?
'No...'
I waited.
'...Sir.'
'Good...Gods help you if there was a problem. The meeting is finished. Ready the ships.'
'Will the dragons be required, sir?'
'Yes.'
'Is that everything, sir?'
'Are you mocking me...?'
'No, I would not dare.'
I nodded in satisfaction.
'Now go, before I kill you for your insubordination.'
When my soldiers' had gone, I allowed myself a brief glance at my scarred stump of an arm.
I smiled, thinking of glorious revenge.
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Rocky Rose
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13 Jul 2014, 15:36
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Deadly Nadder
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This is awesome
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"I saw him, and I saw myself."- Hiccup
"With Vikings on the backs of dragons, the world just got a whole lot bigger."
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Toothless123
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13 Jul 2014, 15:38
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I'll post the next chapter!
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Toothless123
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13 Jul 2014, 16:11
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- Fireproof - Chapter Two: Ready The Ships
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"Hurry. Get those dragons in the cages. Drago said we're going to set sail soon.'
"Aye aye."
'Have you prepared the dragons yet?' I asked one of the members of my crew.
'Well...erm, the thing is, sir, we haven't quite finished...They're being, erm, stubborn...'
'Stubborn?'
'y-yes...But, I'm sure since you're the "Dragon Master" and all, you'll sort them out...'
'Yes, I will.'
I walked over to a dragon, which started to cower and whimper. I grabbed it by the neck, causing it to squeal in pain, and threw it into it's cage.
It looked at me through sad, fearful eyes.
I stared at it coldly.
It's gaze turned away, with a soft whimper.
'Anyone else?' I asked the remaining dragons, daring them to stay where they were.
As expected, they ran into their cages, squealing and pushing each other over in their terror.
I threw the stragglers into their cages.
Turning around, I noticed that my soldiers were looking at me in fascinated horror, and some of them, in admiration.
But, mingled with those expressions, every single one of them contained one emotion.
Fear. The same fear that the apparently "stubborn" dragon had had in it's eyes.
'WHAT ARE YOU DOING STANDING AROUND FOR?!' I roared. 'SET SAIL!'
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draconicwyvern
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13 Jul 2014, 16:13
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kyt, 18, she/her.
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Interesting. I perceive the POV is Drago's?
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Toothless123
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13 Jul 2014, 16:17
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Yep. Do you want the format to be *insert name here* POV?
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Rocky Rose
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13 Jul 2014, 16:20
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- 13 Jul 2014, 20:17
Yep. Do you want the format to be *insert name here* POV?
Actually, that would help I use it almost all the time myself
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"I saw him, and I saw myself."- Hiccup
"With Vikings on the backs of dragons, the world just got a whole lot bigger."
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draconicwyvern
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13 Jul 2014, 16:21
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kyt, 18, she/her.
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- 13 Jul 2014, 20:17
Yep. Do you want the format to be *insert name here* POV?
It doesn't really matter in this case, seeing as it is only his POV; besides I'm sure it'll be easy to tell who it is by the scarred arm. However, who are the other people talking in the first chapter? Are they the same person?
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Toothless123
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13 Jul 2014, 16:22
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13 Jul 2014, 16:25
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- 13 Jul 2014, 20:21
- Toothless123
- 13 Jul 2014, 20:17
Yep. Do you want the format to be *insert name here* POV?
It doesn't really matter in this case, seeing as it is only his POV; besides I'm sure it'll be easy to tell who it is by the scarred arm. However, who are the other people talking in the first chapter? Are they the same person?
They're just soldiers. But I will give them names, if it helps, so you can tell who's speaking. That's generally the point of names...
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