Hell Bound
Posted: 23 Aug 2014, 10:05
by toothless lover
Hi!!!!
Here's my new fanfic (chapter 1 split into 2 parts)
Here's my new fanfic (chapter 1 split into 2 parts)
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Suddenly pineapples
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The real Chapter 1
Fpov:(Freya's point of view)
Tears trickled down my face. I brushed the ashes off my shirt. I swore revenge. I thought wiping my tears away. I turned around to see the devastation they had caused, i walked slowly back to the village. The smell of smoke filled the air. They where all gone, my family, friends. I saw my house , burned to the ground. I kneeled down and saw the remains of my wooden toy sword, I started to cry again. My sadness turned to anger. I would have my revenge, the dragons will pay.
Narrator:
Freya went to the remains of the armoury,broken swords and axes scattered the floor, she searched for one that wasn't too damaged. Freya found a dagger which was slightly out of shape.she carefully picked it up trying to only touch the leather which was wrapped around the handle.
Fpov:
I knew I couldn't stay. But I didn't know where to go. I tucked the dagger under my belt. I decided to roam the ruins of the village to see I could find anything of use.
I remember the island, such a lively place, trees laden with fruit, children playing in the village, trader johane coming and bringing exotic things.
Narrator:
Freya Freya.said a voice. Freya spun around,there was no one. She gripped the handle of her dagger. Freya Freya.called the voice again. Who are you.said Freya.
There was no reply. Where are you.said Freya.
I can help.......get revenge.the voice whispered
Fpov:
Everything went silent. A cold breeze passed through the village. I felt I was not alone. As if hell was calling.
Fpov:(Freya's point of view)
Tears trickled down my face. I brushed the ashes off my shirt. I swore revenge. I thought wiping my tears away. I turned around to see the devastation they had caused, i walked slowly back to the village. The smell of smoke filled the air. They where all gone, my family, friends. I saw my house , burned to the ground. I kneeled down and saw the remains of my wooden toy sword, I started to cry again. My sadness turned to anger. I would have my revenge, the dragons will pay.
Narrator:
Freya went to the remains of the armoury,broken swords and axes scattered the floor, she searched for one that wasn't too damaged. Freya found a dagger which was slightly out of shape.she carefully picked it up trying to only touch the leather which was wrapped around the handle.
Fpov:
I knew I couldn't stay. But I didn't know where to go. I tucked the dagger under my belt. I decided to roam the ruins of the village to see I could find anything of use.
I remember the island, such a lively place, trees laden with fruit, children playing in the village, trader johane coming and bringing exotic things.
Narrator:
Freya Freya.said a voice. Freya spun around,there was no one. She gripped the handle of her dagger. Freya Freya.called the voice again. Who are you.said Freya.
There was no reply. Where are you.said Freya.
I can help.......get revenge.the voice whispered
Fpov:
Everything went silent. A cold breeze passed through the village. I felt I was not alone. As if hell was calling.
