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Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]
Topic Started: 10 Sep 2014, 16:12 (9919 Views)
BerserkDragon 10 Sep 2014, 16:12 Post #31
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cometotheberkside
10 Sep 2014, 20:05
Nice suspense factor! Only thing would be the round → around thing. ^_^
EVERY TIME XD I'm gonna write it in big in my notebook: "AROUND, NOT ROUND." XD Thanks for reminding me again, and thanks for the feedback! :D
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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Toothless123 10 Sep 2014, 16:23 Post #32
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DUN DUN DUN!
Will Drago kill Eret...? :blink: :O
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BerserkDragon 10 Sep 2014, 16:25 Post #33
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Toothless123
10 Sep 2014, 20:23
DUN DUN DUN!
Will Drago kill Eret...? :blink: :O
Nah, I don't think so :P He's too important a character to die :D yet
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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Toothless123 10 Sep 2014, 16:28 Post #34
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BerserkDragon
10 Sep 2014, 20:25
yet
Spoiler alert! -_- :P
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BerserkDragon 10 Sep 2014, 16:38 Post #35
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Toothless123
10 Sep 2014, 20:28
BerserkDragon
10 Sep 2014, 20:25
yet
Spoiler alert! -_- :P
Maybe, maybe not :P It could all be a distraction...
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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HiccupxAstrid123 11 Sep 2014, 12:18 Post #36
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Gronckle

Great job! You are such amazing author. :hiccup: <3 :astrid:
HICCSTRID IS SOOOO CUTE
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BerserkDragon 11 Sep 2014, 14:06 Post #37
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HiccupxAstrid123
11 Sep 2014, 16:18
Great job! You are such amazing author. :hiccup: <3 :astrid:
Thank you!!!! :D
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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BirdyTheBrave 14 Sep 2014, 09:22 Post #38
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Pretty good! If I had to be super picky, to make your chapters longer, try elaborating on a few details. Not every single one, just select a couple. That's all I could critique. Great job!
Update guys: It's party time with Joe.
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BerserkDragon 14 Sep 2014, 09:25 Post #39
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BirdyTheBrave
14 Sep 2014, 13:22
Pretty good! If I had to be super picky, to make your chapters longer, try elaborating on a few details. Not every single one, just select a couple. That's all I could critique. Great job!
Awesome, thank you!! :D
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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HiccupxAstrid123 17 Sep 2014, 12:47 Post #40
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Gronckle

Ok, how are you such a great author cause by the time I finished reading it I was on the edge of my seat, literally. :hiccup: <3 :astrid:
HICCSTRID IS SOOOO CUTE
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