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Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 25 Aug 2014, 10:41
by BerserkDragon
dragons_ind
25 Aug 2014, 14:38
critic
Yeah, I find it hard to find places for everyone in the gang xD Sometimes I even forget about Toothless and Stormfly and I have to find a spot for them somewhere xD
I suppose it's because I want both this fanfic and its prequel to focus mainly on how Hiccup deals with being a chief. But yeah, I'll try and find spaces for the gang :D Thanks for pointing that out! :D

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 25 Aug 2014, 11:09
by dragons_ind
BerserkDragon
25 Aug 2014, 14:41
dragons_ind
25 Aug 2014, 14:38
critic
Yeah, I find it hard to find places for everyone in the gang xD Sometimes I even forget about Toothless and Stormfly and I have to find a spot for them somewhere xD
I suppose it's because I want both this fanfic and its prequel to focus mainly on how Hiccup deals with being a chief. But yeah, I'll try and find spaces for the gang :D Thanks for pointing that out! :D
:D
Keep the good work!
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Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 25 Aug 2014, 16:48
by HiccupxAstrid123
I already love it great work !! :hiccup: <3 :astrid:

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 29 Aug 2014, 05:01
by BerserkDragon
Ugh, it's been so long since I've written anything :blink: Time for a break from drawing!
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Let me know what you think :$

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 29 Aug 2014, 08:51
by draconicwyvern
I love it so far! BTW, I still think there's not much to change about the beginning, but if you need help on lengthening chapters, I can probably help, since seeing I'm 8 chapters in my fanfiction and still haven't reached a turning point (which isn't the best... :( )

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 29 Aug 2014, 10:17
by BerserkDragon
cometotheberkside
29 Aug 2014, 12:51
I love it so far! BTW, I still think there's not much to change about the beginning, but if you need help on lengthening chapters, I can probably help, since seeing I'm 8 chapters in my fanfiction and still haven't reached a turning point (which isn't the best... :( )
Thanks! :D Really? I must just be paranoid then xD
Yeah, I'd like a bit of help lengthening them... any tips?

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 29 Aug 2014, 12:02
by Toothless123
"May the gods help us all..." Yes, Hiccup, yes indeed... :blink:

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 29 Aug 2014, 19:08
by dragons_ind
One thing : Oh no.... :O

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 29 Aug 2014, 21:00
by HiccupxAstrid123
Love it!!! You are one awesome author!!! I can't wait to read chapter 3! :hiccup: <3 :astrid:

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 03 Sep 2014, 09:51
by BerserkDragon
Here it is! :D
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Ugh still so short -_- I'm trying to make them longer! xD

Let me know what you think! :D