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Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 03 Sep 2014, 12:42
by HiccupxAstrid123
Wow, I didn't see that coming at all. You are good. :hiccup: <3 :astrid:

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 03 Sep 2014, 12:57
by BerserkDragon
HiccupxAstrid123
03 Sep 2014, 16:42
Wow, I didn't see that coming at all. You are good. :hiccup: <3 :astrid:
Thanks! :D But it was cometotheberkside who thought of the fact Eret could be thought a traitor ;)

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 03 Sep 2014, 15:49
by Toothless123
BerserkDragon
03 Sep 2014, 16:57
HiccupxAstrid123
03 Sep 2014, 16:42
Wow, I didn't see that coming at all. You are good. :hiccup: <3 :astrid:
Thanks! :D But it was cometotheberkside who thought of the fact Eret could be thought a traitor ;)
Didn't I give you some ideas, too? :P

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 03 Sep 2014, 15:50
by draconicwyvern
Great work! When I have time I'll help you with lengthing that :) since you thought it was too short.

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 03 Sep 2014, 16:16
by Toothless123
I was actually smiling at the epicness of this chapter, when I read it for the first time. 8)

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 03 Sep 2014, 18:28
by dragons_ind
Eret, how could you?

Good chapters! Didn't see that coming.

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 04 Sep 2014, 11:46
by BerserkDragon
Toothless123
03 Sep 2014, 19:49
BerserkDragon
03 Sep 2014, 16:57
HiccupxAstrid123
03 Sep 2014, 16:42
Wow, I didn't see that coming at all. You are good. :hiccup: <3 :astrid:
Thanks! :D But it was cometotheberkside who thought of the fact Eret could be thought a traitor ;)
Didn't I give you some ideas, too? :P
Yup, they're gonna be in chapter 4! :D
cometotheberkside
03 Sep 2014, 19:50
Great work! When I have time I'll help you with lengthing that :) since you thought it was too short.
Awesome, thank you! :D
dragons_ind
03 Sep 2014, 22:28
Eret, how could you?

Good chapters! Didn't see that coming.
Thank you!! :D

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 04 Sep 2014, 11:51
by Toothless123
@BerserkDragon, I was just confirming that my ideas were going to be in the next chapter . :P

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 10 Sep 2014, 15:59
by BerserkDragon
I'm back :D Wow, it's been about a week! xD

Chapter 4 has finally landed! :D
Spoiler: click to toggle
This is maybe the longest chapter so far for Soul of a Dragon. Make sure to let me know what you think, and point out any typos! :D

Soul of a Dragon [sequel to Heart of a Chief]

Posted: 10 Sep 2014, 16:05
by draconicwyvern
Nice suspense factor! Only thing would be the round → around thing. ^_^