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I did a thing...
Topic Started: 16 Feb 2015, 14:34 (1263 Views)
nightfury123
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My auntie's dog might die...
:'(

So I did a thing on my iPad in absence of my laptop. :$ It's just a little oneshot - I've been thinking about writing it. I guess it could technically be called the prologue of 'The Boy', or it could be considered an alternate fanfic to it. Anyway, here you go.

(By the way, I don't know what to call it yet, so once you've read it I'd appreciate some ideas. ;) Also, I know I could have done a better beginning... -_-
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"A warning to the people, the good and the evil. This is war..."
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BirdyTheBrave
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I like big books and I cannot lie.

BEAUTIFUL! <3

A few minor mistakes: "Everyone, get out of the village!" I shouted. Is "I" a typo, of did you mean it to be a change of perspective?

And maybe you could add something about HOW the chief knew the sea dragon was going to attack before anyone else?

Other than that, it's awesome!! :D :D :D

I actually quite like the beginning.... ;)
Update guys: It's party time with Joe.
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