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The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 09 Sep 2015, 14:54
by sageman
well i had this idea late last night and decided to write the first chapter


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11498031/1 ... om-Norfolk

The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 18 Sep 2015, 20:09
by sageman
Im on chapter 4 now if anyone is reading

The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 03 Oct 2015, 04:26
by draco
I'm liking it so far. :D
I'm a slow reader. :D

The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 03 Oct 2015, 05:49
by draco
Just finished reading it. :D
I loved it. :D :D
But at the end of your story, you gave away who the dragon was. It was hiccup.
One question, what happened to toothless? :unsure:

The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 03 Oct 2015, 12:30
by sageman
as i said on the story ive cut my fingers off on an industreal gilloten at work theyve put them backnon but how long till everything heALs i can use them i have no idea dso for the time beeing you wont see any updates

The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 17 Oct 2015, 14:31
by sageman
well ive (very) slowly been going through the story adding a few bits here and there doing a few changes and a bit of editing i missed the first time round
(my thumbs were uninjured so i can still type just very slowly)

anyway i think i need a name change but am unsure on what to call it any suggestions


The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 17 Oct 2015, 17:37
by draco
Well I can't wait to read when your done.
And I like the original title.

The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 17 Oct 2015, 19:31
by sageman
dont get too excited its only a bit of tidying up :)


The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 17 Oct 2015, 20:27
by sageman
oh and heres the song i changed some of the lyrics to
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPgX87z ... e=youtu.be

The night furys from Norfolk

Posted: 15 Nov 2015, 20:40
by sageman
I changed it again lol
Chapter 3 has been very hard for me to write as Ive been trying to make the reactions seem realistic. Ive been at this chapter all weekend and i think Ive finally got it right
Could someone please take a read through I especially want to know if you think some parts went too fast without enough detail.
I haven't gone through with the spell checker yet, or added punctuation so theres no need to tell me about that.
Thanks.

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