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The night furys from Norfolk
Topic Started: 09 Sep 2015, 14:54 (3260 Views)
sageman
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well i had this idea late last night and decided to write the first chapter


https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11498031/1 ... om-Norfolk
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Im on chapter 4 now if anyone is reading
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mystery dragon, pic drawn by night fury fire. Thank you :)

I'm liking it so far. :D
I'm a slow reader. :D
Dragons, need I say more.

Hiccup, chief of berc, dragon master.
Toothless, alpha dragon.
You and me bud we can do this, as one.
It's just a zipple misunderstanding
I like a pit, but I love a boar pit.
i am hurt,I am very much hurt.
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mystery dragon, pic drawn by night fury fire. Thank you :)

Just finished reading it. :D
I loved it. :D :D
But at the end of your story, you gave away who the dragon was. It was hiccup.
One question, what happened to toothless? :unsure:
Dragons, need I say more.

Hiccup, chief of berc, dragon master.
Toothless, alpha dragon.
You and me bud we can do this, as one.
It's just a zipple misunderstanding
I like a pit, but I love a boar pit.
i am hurt,I am very much hurt.
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sageman
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as i said on the story ive cut my fingers off on an industreal gilloten at work theyve put them backnon but how long till everything heALs i can use them i have no idea dso for the time beeing you wont see any updates
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well ive (very) slowly been going through the story adding a few bits here and there doing a few changes and a bit of editing i missed the first time round
(my thumbs were uninjured so i can still type just very slowly)

anyway i think i need a name change but am unsure on what to call it any suggestions

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mystery dragon, pic drawn by night fury fire. Thank you :)

Well I can't wait to read when your done.
And I like the original title.
Dragons, need I say more.

Hiccup, chief of berc, dragon master.
Toothless, alpha dragon.
You and me bud we can do this, as one.
It's just a zipple misunderstanding
I like a pit, but I love a boar pit.
i am hurt,I am very much hurt.
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sageman
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dont get too excited its only a bit of tidying up :)

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oh and heres the song i changed some of the lyrics to
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPgX87z ... e=youtu.be
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sageman
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I changed it again lol
Chapter 3 has been very hard for me to write as Ive been trying to make the reactions seem realistic. Ive been at this chapter all weekend and i think Ive finally got it right
Could someone please take a read through I especially want to know if you think some parts went too fast without enough detail.
I haven't gone through with the spell checker yet, or added punctuation so theres no need to tell me about that.
Thanks.

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