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| Topic Started: 12 Jan 2016, 04:13 (5326 Views) | |
| DrumsOfBerk95 | 12 Jan 2016, 04:13 Post #31 |
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I just read the first chapter and it is a very nice start to a story. I will continue to read it. Btw, nice work on the first chapter. It was very well written. (Did you die yet?  Because you said you would if I read one of your fan-fics.)
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| Crystallion12 | 12 Jan 2016, 08:24 Post #32 |
Dunno what to say here.....
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I'm still alive... Barely. Now I need to pass out. Excuse me. |
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Save the Earth... It's the only planet with donuts! May the stars watch over you, the dragons roar at the sound of your name, and peace, love and the truth enlighten your heart forever, May you stay true to your soul, mind and heart. Your choices, opinions and life are solely your own, give only the ones you hold dear to your heart your heart, and all your word. Make the right choices, and tread carefully, and live your life to its very fullest, Crystallion12. | |
| DrumsOfBerk95 | 13 Jan 2016, 03:28 Post #33 |
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When I read chapter 2, I had to read chapter 3. Still good and interesting. I'll check some more later.  (If you passed out for the last reply, what are doing for this one? XD ) |
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| Crystallion12 | 13 Jan 2016, 15:09 Post #34 |
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Dunno what to say here.....
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Sorry for the late reply... I just woke up from my coma... XD Very hard work. Thanks so much for reading! Even if it is slowly killing me... So worth it. |
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Save the Earth... It's the only planet with donuts! May the stars watch over you, the dragons roar at the sound of your name, and peace, love and the truth enlighten your heart forever, May you stay true to your soul, mind and heart. Your choices, opinions and life are solely your own, give only the ones you hold dear to your heart your heart, and all your word. Make the right choices, and tread carefully, and live your life to its very fullest, Crystallion12. | |
| DrumsOfBerk95 | 14 Jan 2016, 02:28 Post #35 |
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Hatchling
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Read the next chapter. Going to stop there because if I read chapter 5, I might read chapter 6. XD Very good. So you have been in a coma and have passed out... what's next? 
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| Crystallion12 | 14 Jan 2016, 04:42 Post #36 |
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Dunno what to say here.....
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Huh. Yeah, this is Toothless here, Crystallion's in the hospital. She says that she tahbks you, and... I CANT SAY THAT!! Ok, never mind, thanks! |
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Save the Earth... It's the only planet with donuts! May the stars watch over you, the dragons roar at the sound of your name, and peace, love and the truth enlighten your heart forever, May you stay true to your soul, mind and heart. Your choices, opinions and life are solely your own, give only the ones you hold dear to your heart your heart, and all your word. Make the right choices, and tread carefully, and live your life to its very fullest, Crystallion12. | |
| DrumsOfBerk95 | 15 Jan 2016, 15:01 Post #37 |
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I read Chapter 5 and 6. You're doing a great job. Great story. So passed out, coma, and in the hospital... What's next after those?
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