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Should I continue or is this a good ending?
Yes 11 (92%)
No 1 (8%)

But Then This Happened
Topic Started: 27 Jul 2014, 19:41 (5514 Views)
draco
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mystery dragon, pic drawn by night fury fire. Thank you :)

HumanToothless
12 Apr 2014, 00:15
"You know you have to let it go, Hiccup." Astrid said softly as she stood next to Hiccup. "I know but….it's just hard to let it go." Hiccup said sadly. "Your dad didn't want you to mourn for to long since it affects all of us." Astrid stated. "'The chief doesn't only affect himself but also the whole village' is what your dad used to say." "I just can't seem to make myself let go of the past and move on." Hiccup said. "Hiccup, I can't stand seeing you suffering so much. It has been a month since….well….you know." Astrid said sadly. "Everyone is upset as well." "I just can't seem to be able to be chief and a normal person who is mourning for someone." Hiccup said near tears. He took a deep breath and shuddered trying to contain his sobs that were threatening to rise. "He was very important to me even though he wasn't there for me before we started training dragons and I guess it's time to finally let go." "You may not be able to bring him back but you can always remember him in your memories and we will help you through your grief." Astrid stated. "You can also visit him here since he is the first in Berk history to actually have a grave." "I guess that is better than nothing." Hiccup said defeated. Astrid started to walk away but turned around to say, "I'm going to let you have some time alone. I'll wait for you at the Great Hall." and with that, she left the cavern. Hiccup sighed and looked back down at the stone with Viking writing. Engraved on the stone was

"Here lies a hero and a beloved friend

Toothless the Night Fury"

"I'll never forget you, bud. You gave me a purpose and for that I owe you much." Hiccup said as tears began to stream down his face. He wiped the tears away with his arm and began to leave but turned around to see his buried friend one last time and left. His friend was gone but their memories together were still alive. Hiccup walked back towards Berk and he had just arrived outside the Great Hall when the Screaming Death swooped over the Great Hall and loomed over Hiccup. Hiccup stood afraid. He had no weapon or shield to hold or protect him. Well I guess this is how my life ends like all the Vikings before me, killed by a dragon. The Screaming Death was about to fire when Astrid rushed in and pushed out of the way just as flames engulfed Astrid. "NOOOOOOOO!
did you ever try and write a begining to this story? It just seems so imcomplete without one.

Dragons, need I say more.

Hiccup, chief of berc, dragon master.
Toothless, alpha dragon.
You and me bud we can do this, as one.
It's just a zipple misunderstanding
I like a pit, but I love a boar pit.
i am hurt,I am very much hurt.
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Rocky Rose
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I think it just needs a bit more in paragraph formatting between leaving Toothless' grave and Astrid dying by the Great Hall..

Other then that, great stuff ;) (and sad but you got the feels there so awesomely ) :P
"I saw him, and I saw myself."- Hiccup
"With Vikings on the backs of dragons, the world just got a whole lot bigger."


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draco
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mystery dragon, pic drawn by night fury fire. Thank you :)

true, but it leaves the story open on how toothless died.
Dragons, need I say more.

Hiccup, chief of berc, dragon master.
Toothless, alpha dragon.
You and me bud we can do this, as one.
It's just a zipple misunderstanding
I like a pit, but I love a boar pit.
i am hurt,I am very much hurt.
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HumanToothless
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Hey everyone I know most of you were waiting for a sequel to this story but currently I don't feel inspired so I wouldn't be able to write a story that I would feel satisfied with. :/ I'm sorry I feel like I let you guys down. :'( :(
I ate a tasty looking purple flower and then the next thing you know I am human. I am currently trying to get used to the whole being human thing so be nice. I am completely human not a hybrid okay?
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draco
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mystery dragon, pic drawn by night fury fire. Thank you :)

I hope you are inspired some day to finish it. :D
Dragons, need I say more.

Hiccup, chief of berc, dragon master.
Toothless, alpha dragon.
You and me bud we can do this, as one.
It's just a zipple misunderstanding
I like a pit, but I love a boar pit.
i am hurt,I am very much hurt.
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