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When Dead Men Rise-update- Chapter 2 (FINALLY)
Topic Started: 10 Oct 2014, 22:55 (6845 Views)
draconicwyvern
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kyt, 18, she/her.

BirdyTheBrave
11 Oct 2014, 00:54
cometotheberkside
10 Oct 2014, 21:00
The new title chills me.
IDK, I might change it, but it seemed pretty suitable.
Nah, I mean it chills me in a good way :)
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cometotheberkside
11 Oct 2014, 02:55
BirdyTheBrave
11 Oct 2014, 00:54
cometotheberkside
10 Oct 2014, 21:00
The new title chills me.
IDK, I might change it, but it seemed pretty suitable.
Nah, I mean it chills me in a good way :)
No, no, I didn't take offence in any way. I meant for the title to be chilling. I am just not completely sure of it myself yet.
Update guys: It's party time with Joe.
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Chapter 1 update... Tell me what you guys think!
Update guys: It's party time with Joe.
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Very good chapter! I liked Hiccup and Astrid's interaction. You really captured them both really well!

Waiting for the next chapter!
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I was wondering, does anyone really want to see this fanfic finished? I know I haven't written that much yet, but I am already feeling stress, lack of time and lack of passion.
Update guys: It's party time with Joe.
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BirdyTheBrave
02 Nov 2014, 10:09
I was wondering, does anyone really want to see this fanfic finished? I know I haven't written that much yet, but I am already feeling stress, lack of time and lack of passion.
Please carry on with it! ;) I've temporarily discontinued (which is what I like to call it :P ) a lot of my fanfics, as you can see if you take a look at some of the older pages of the Stories section, but I'm planning to go back to them someday, so I'm speaking from experience. :D Maybe you just have writers' block? ^)
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02 Nov 2014, 10:48
BirdyTheBrave
02 Nov 2014, 10:09
I was wondering, does anyone really want to see this fanfic finished? I know I haven't written that much yet, but I am already feeling stress, lack of time and lack of passion.
Please carry on with it! ;) I've temporarily discontinued (which is what I like to call it :P ) a lot of my fanfics, as you can see if you take a look at some of the older pages of the Stories section, but I'm planning to go back to them someday, so I'm speaking from experience. :D Maybe you just have writers' block? ^)
I think that is part of it. But it's coming towards the end of school, and everything is hectic around this time... I will see what I can do. Thanks :P
Update guys: It's party time with Joe.
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02 Nov 2014, 12:46
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02 Nov 2014, 10:48
BirdyTheBrave
02 Nov 2014, 10:09
I was wondering, does anyone really want to see this fanfic finished? I know I haven't written that much yet, but I am already feeling stress, lack of time and lack of passion.
Please carry on with it! ;) I've temporarily discontinued (which is what I like to call it :P ) a lot of my fanfics, as you can see if you take a look at some of the older pages of the Stories section, but I'm planning to go back to them someday, so I'm speaking from experience. :D Maybe you just have writers' block? ^)
I think that is part of it. But it's coming towards the end of school, and everything is hectic around this time... I will see what I can do. Thanks :P
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OK! So i haven't updated this story in several months, and to be quite honest I wasn't intending to finish it at all, until only a couple of weeks ago. I must say it was all because of Toothless123's endless banter. I am very grateful for all you support, and I cannot thank you enough for inspiring me again ^_^ .

Anyway, here it is: The second chapter. Please feel free to comment and critique!
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Ok! the next chapter should hopefully be up soon.
Until then, stay Fabulous Berkians 8) 8) 8)
Birdy
Update guys: It's party time with Joe.
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My auntie's dog might die...
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You're welcome, and the read I've had of it now that this chapter's officially been posted on the forum is just as awesome as all the times I've read it in my PM. 8)

I noticed that you edited it. ;)

Ridian smelt blood on his father's breath OMG he's a vampire xD

Hey, something that I said in my PM but that I'm assuming you didn't read (not intentionally of course, I'm hoping :P ) ;) : the part when Ridian's father asks his son how he is, and the ensuing conversation reminds me a little of a similar scene in Ratatouille. Did you perhaps take inspiration from that? 8) :P

An adaption for the Skrill idea that I suggested in my PM and that you said you would use: ;)
I'll put this in spoilers just in case you decide to use it, and other people don't want to look at it for that reason. 8)
The Idea
"A warning to the people, the good and the evil. This is war..."
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