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Collaborative FanFic: Brothers in Arms-Chapter One
Topic Started: 01 May 2014, 19:13 (2107 Views)
Dragon's Apprentice
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01 May 2014, 21:32
hmm just a slight comment i have a tendency to switch between past and present tense while posting so you might want to make sure you changed all Jay's things to past tense so it's not as confusing…
I do the same :L and It's understandable anyway :p you're grand :)
"I was so afraid of becoming my dad. Mostly because I thought I never could. How do you become someone that great, that brave, that selfless? I guess you can only try."</3
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Any thoughts on the polls posted on page 1? :)
"I was so afraid of becoming my dad. Mostly because I thought I never could. How do you become someone that great, that brave, that selfless? I guess you can only try."</3
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