Heart of a Chief |
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BerserkDragon
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18 Jul 2014, 17:58
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- Toothless123
- 18 Jul 2014, 21:35
Awwwwww....
- HiccupxAstrid123
- 18 Jul 2014, 21:44
- cometotheberkside
- 18 Jul 2014, 21:49
Thank you all!! 
I'm definitely continuing this story! 
Heart of a Chief, pt3 Suddenly, footsteps could be heard from upstairs, along with a few loud dragon yawns. Seconds later, a large black head appeared at the top of the stairs, on which large green eyes looked round curiously, and two nostrils sniffed the air to track down the smell of fish. Spotting me and mom, Toothless came bounding down the stairs and sat eagerly next to me like a puppy, hoping to get a bit of fish soup as well.
“Lazy dragon,” I said jokingly as I gave him what was left in the bowl. He licked his lips and started messily drinking the soup, sending drops of it everywhere.
Mom laughed. She got up and took her helmet from the shelf. “Well, I'd better go check on the Nest to see if the repairs are going along well!” She sighed and stared into the distance. “He spent so long building it, just to have to wrecked...”
“I'm sure it's going fine,” I said reassuringly. She smiled and headed out the door, calling for Cloudjumper as she did so.
No sooner had she left another voice was heard from outside. “Hiccup! Are you in there?”
“Astrid!”
I got up and brushed off some droplets of soup from my shirt, only to have them smudge even more. “Great...” I turned to Toothless. “Do I look OK?”
He simply looked at me with his big green eyes as if to say “Erm... yeah, I suppose.”
I don't know what to write after this. Any ideas?
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Me? An otaku? Pfff.
Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.
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Toothless123
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18 Jul 2014, 18:02
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Night Fury
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I was waiting for Hiccup to say, "Great. Dragon pity." after Toothless looked at him.
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BerserkDragon
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19 Jul 2014, 06:15
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Heart of a Chief, pt4 I got up and brushed off some droplets of soup from my shirt, only to have them smudge even more. “Great...” I turned to Toothless. “Do I look OK?”
He simply looked at me with his big green eyes as if to say “Erm... yeah, I suppose.”
I frowned. “Great. Dragon pity.”
Before I could do anything about my rather messy appearance, Astrid came in without knocking. “I see you're still not totally awake!” she joked.
I grinned and scratched the back of my neck. “Not quite.”
She gave me a quick peck on the cheek then headed back towards the door. “I know you've got all your chief stuff to do, but fancy going for a flight later on?”
I winced when she mentioned my “chief stuff”. If only Dad were here...
“Sure, no problem,” I said, trying to hide my sadness. Fortunately she didn't notice the flat note in my voice and headed outside.
I breathed a sigh of relief. Even though I usually shared everything with Astrid, I didn't want to burden her with my worry.
I went upstairs and slipped on my flight suit, Toothless waiting patiently by the front door for me to come back down. As I adjusted the straps, I noticed the small wooden duck sitting on my desk that Dad had made one day. Next to it I had placed the dragon toy Mom had made me when I was younger. I sighed and picked them both up.
“I'm never going to get through this if I keep on mourning,” I said sternly to myself. “I have to move on. If Dad could talk to me from Valhalla then he'd tell me to do just that.”
I placed each toy back in its place on my desk, then ran my finger along the smooth woodwork of the duck's back. “I have to move on.”
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Me? An otaku? Pfff.
Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.
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BerserkDragon
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19 Jul 2014, 06:29
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I published the first four parts at the first chapter on fanfiction.net but it will take between 4-8 hours to publish publicly
My fanfic profile: https://www.fanfiction.net/~berserkdragon
If someone could make a cool cover for this story I'd be grateful
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Me? An otaku? Pfff.
Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.
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Toothless123
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19 Jul 2014, 06:32
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Night Fury
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Yay, you added my suggestion- "Great. Dragon pity." !
Edit: I've remembered that I need to upload my stories to my Fanfiction account too...
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BerserkDragon
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19 Jul 2014, 06:49
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- Toothless123
- 19 Jul 2014, 10:32
Yay, you added my suggestion- "Great. Dragon pity."  !
Yep
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Me? An otaku? Pfff.
Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.
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Toothless123
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19 Jul 2014, 06:51
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19 Jul 2014, 08:34
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kyt, 18, she/her.
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The plot of the story is really creative! (since I'm going through a non-creative period currently… )
Two things:
1. (I feel bad whenever I need to correct a typo) "…winced when she mentions" mentioned
2. I could try to make a cover for you (although Hope_and_Heir is obviously more experienced in this department XD )(wonder if she's busy or not…)
Anyways, great work, and if I remember I will definitely submit a review on FF.net!
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BerserkDragon
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19 Jul 2014, 08:44
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- cometotheberkside
- 19 Jul 2014, 12:34
The plot of the story is really creative! (since I'm going through a non-creative period currently…  )
Two things:
1. (I feel bad whenever I need to correct a typo) "…winced when she mentions" mentioned
2. I could try to make a cover for you  (although Hope_and_Heir is obviously more experienced in this department XD )(wonder if she's busy or not…)
Anyways, great work, and if I remember I will definitely submit a review on FF.net!
Ah yeah, thanks On the contrary, I like it when people correct typos! It saves further embarrassment XD LOL
Awesome!!!!!
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Me? An otaku? Pfff.
Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.
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HiccupxAstrid123
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19 Jul 2014, 14:29
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Love it I can soo see this after dragons 2 !
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HICCSTRID IS SOOOO CUTE
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