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27 May 2014, 17:27
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[color=#B40431]Winner of Shnuckle's Oneshot Fanfiction Contest 2014 [/color]
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- cometotheberkside
- 27 May 2014, 21:21
- Hope_and_Heir
- 27 May 2014, 21:13
I'll help as soon as I get done with .'Just the Beginning…'  I'm working on the very last scene and the epilogue.
Yay! Can't wait to read the whole thing!
I'm excited to post it :3 this is one of my best.
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'There Were Dragons When I Was A Boy…'
  
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draconicwyvern
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27 May 2014, 17:47
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Spoiler: click to toggle It's been a few years since the battle with the Red Death, and since then life on Berk had been thriving. The inhabitants of the island were no longer worried of a dragon raid, but were now waiting with anticipation for the dragon racing to begin.
Hiccup was racing with his friends, happy and feeling like nothing could possibly ruin his mood. He clicked the tail fin, and Toothless banked sharply, swerving around Fishlegs and Meatlug as he slowly took the lead. As Night Furies were the fastest dragons and Hiccup was the best rider, they always started behind the others - but that didn't stop them from winning almost every time, much to Astrid's disappointment, though seeing him happy, it was hard to be mad at him.
As he and Toothless streaked through the air, passing the others and gradually taking the lead, Hiccup thought back to what had happened over the past few years. It had been two or three years since the fall of the Red Death at the hands of Hiccup and Toothless, and although it had happened slowly, dragons had found their niche in Berk's society - although admittedly there were a few houses that had to be rebuilt along the way.
As his memories flowed back to him, he remembered the day that dragon racing was unofficially created. It was a peaceful day when Snotlout and the twins got bored and decided to start racing each other. As the races continued, the other teens gradually started to join in, with Hiccup being the last to start racing. After a few accusations of cheating which no one could prove since there were no rules at the time, they created rules for the races, and the sport of dragon racing was born.
Hiccup and the beast under him won the game... again. But the crowd cheered as they always did, a cacophony of applause and shouted compliments. It made the rider smile.
This is Berk, he thought. The only place on earth where people and dragons coexist. People here call me a hero, but I just did what I thought was best for my friend. No one could predict what happened next. This new world was created. It's beautiful. The dragons have helped to build Berk. We are farther progressed in the world than any other tribe in the archipelago. Plus, the dragons are a great defense. Yep, dragons are truly a gift from the gods.
Astrid landed beside him in a blur of blue and yellow, finishing in second. A thud from her dragon touching the ground finally snapped Hiccup out of his thoughts and submerged him back into reality. She scowled at him. Hiccup shook his head and laughed good-naturally; she never liked it when he – or anyone else – beat her.
“Hello, milady,” he chuckled, unable to keep his mouth straight. Despite herself, Astrid allowed a small smile creep onto her face. Relief swept through Hiccup; perhaps he wouldn't get lectured on how unfair it was to ride on a Night Fury in dragon races. To be fair, though, Night Furies weren't supposed to be in the game, but Astrid could be slightly... persuasive, at times. The only reason Hiccup and Toothless were even allowed to race were thanks to her.
“One of these days, Hiccup,” she said. She tried to sound threatening, but her smile betrayed her. Hiccup laughed and Astrid followed suit.
Snotlout came up from behind them, clenching the horns of his Monstrous Nightmare tightly. His facial expression was a mixture of disappointment and frustration, having only snatched a third.
"Hey Snotlout," Hiccup called, in an attempt to sound as friendly as possible. "Have you seen the others?"
Snotlout's countenance improved and he turned, pointing behind him. "Eh, they're catching up. Slowpokes," he muttered with a hint of pride. His dragon puffed out his chest and closed his eyes, emulating Snotlout's boastful pose.
Hiccup grinned, shaking his head at the Nightmare's imitation.
Not a lot, but I added some stuff. 
Current word count: 661.
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MudkipStar
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27 May 2014, 20:54
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im just kinda here well occasionally
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I like the ideas being thrown around, but I want to know if there would be an opportunity for me to write something from Toothless or another dragon's POV?
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hi im réka
im developing a mildly unhealthy obsession with obiwan kenobi (more like obiwan kenoBAE am i right)
my personal tumblr is ninja-stop
im also writing a fantasy/humor novel called RESET which i won nanowrimo 2015 with i have a writing tumblr for it if you wanna check that out
yeah thats it this probably isnt what should go in a signature but w/e
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draconicwyvern
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28 May 2014, 11:19
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kyt, 18, she/her.
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- MudkipStar
- 28 May 2014, 00:54
I like the ideas being thrown around, but I want to know if there would be an opportunity for me to write something from Toothless or another dragon's POV?
There may be an opportunity, once we sort everything out first, because Toothless may have some with his point of view when he's lost. But that's until we figure out the plot first
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draconicwyvern
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28 May 2014, 22:36
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- cometotheberkside
- 27 May 2014, 21:47
Spoiler: click to toggle It's been a few years since the battle with the Red Death, and since then life on Berk had been thriving. The inhabitants of the island were no longer worried of a dragon raid, but were now waiting with anticipation for the dragon racing to begin.
Hiccup was racing with his friends, happy and feeling like nothing could possibly ruin his mood. He clicked the tail fin, and Toothless banked sharply, swerving around Fishlegs and Meatlug as he slowly took the lead. As Night Furies were the fastest dragons and Hiccup was the best rider, they always started behind the others - but that didn't stop them from winning almost every time, much to Astrid's disappointment, though seeing him happy, it was hard to be mad at him.
As he and Toothless streaked through the air, passing the others and gradually taking the lead, Hiccup thought back to what had happened over the past few years. It had been two or three years since the fall of the Red Death at the hands of Hiccup and Toothless, and although it had happened slowly, dragons had found their niche in Berk's society - although admittedly there were a few houses that had to be rebuilt along the way.
As his memories flowed back to him, he remembered the day that dragon racing was unofficially created. It was a peaceful day when Snotlout and the twins got bored and decided to start racing each other. As the races continued, the other teens gradually started to join in, with Hiccup being the last to start racing. After a few accusations of cheating which no one could prove since there were no rules at the time, they created rules for the races, and the sport of dragon racing was born.
Hiccup and the beast under him won the game... again. But the crowd cheered as they always did, a cacophony of applause and shouted compliments. It made the rider smile.
This is Berk, he thought. The only place on earth where people and dragons coexist. People here call me a hero, but I just did what I thought was best for my friend. No one could predict what happened next. This new world was created. It's beautiful. The dragons have helped to build Berk. We are farther progressed in the world than any other tribe in the archipelago. Plus, the dragons are a great defense. Yep, dragons are truly a gift from the gods.
Astrid landed beside him in a blur of blue and yellow, finishing in second. A thud from her dragon touching the ground finally snapped Hiccup out of his thoughts and submerged him back into reality. She scowled at him. Hiccup shook his head and laughed good-naturally; she never liked it when he – or anyone else – beat her.
“Hello, milady,” he chuckled, unable to keep his mouth straight. Despite herself, Astrid allowed a small smile creep onto her face. Relief swept through Hiccup; perhaps he wouldn't get lectured on how unfair it was to ride on a Night Fury in dragon races. To be fair, though, Night Furies weren't supposed to be in the game, but Astrid could be slightly... persuasive, at times. The only reason Hiccup and Toothless were even allowed to race were thanks to her.
“One of these days, Hiccup,” she said. She tried to sound threatening, but her smile betrayed her. Hiccup laughed and Astrid followed suit.
Snotlout came up from behind them, clenching the horns of his Monstrous Nightmare tightly. His facial expression was a mixture of disappointment and frustration, having only snatched a third.
"Hey Snotlout," Hiccup called, in an attempt to sound as friendly as possible. "Have you seen the others?"
Snotlout's countenance improved and he turned, pointing behind him. "Eh, they're catching up. Slowpokes," he muttered with a hint of pride. His dragon puffed out his chest and closed his eyes, emulating Snotlout's boastful pose.
Hiccup grinned, shaking his head at the Nightmare's imitation.
"What are you smiling for?" Snotlout complained, frowning. "Wipe that silly grin from your face, or else -"
"Dragon riders, coming through!" Tuffnut yelled, zipping towards them with glee. "Get out of the way, Snotty!" Ruffnut cried. "You're blocking our entry!"
Snotlout snapped his head around in surprise. "Hookfang, let's go." Hookfang snorted and ignored him completely. "Hookfang, I'm going to get hurt!" he pleaded anxiously. The Nightmare clacked its razor-sharp teeth together, avoiding his rider's eyes.
Not a lot, but I added some stuff.
Current word count: 661.
Current word count: 738.
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HideousZippleback
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28 May 2014, 22:40
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[color=blue]I'm just here for Snotlout. [/color]
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Spoiler: click to toggle It's been a few years since the battle with the Red Death, and since then life on Berk had been thriving. The inhabitants of the island were no longer worried of a dragon raid, but were now waiting with anticipation for the dragon racing to begin.
Hiccup was racing with his friends, happy and feeling like nothing could possibly ruin his mood. He clicked the tail fin, and Toothless banked sharply, swerving around Fishlegs and Meatlug as he slowly took the lead. As Night Furies were the fastest dragons and Hiccup was the best rider, they always started behind the others - but that didn't stop them from winning almost every time, much to Astrid's disappointment, though seeing him happy, it was hard to be mad at him.
As he and Toothless streaked through the air, passing the others and gradually taking the lead, Hiccup thought back to what had happened over the past few years. It had been two or three years since the fall of the Red Death at the hands of Hiccup and Toothless, and although it had happened slowly, dragons had found their niche in Berk's society - although admittedly there were a few houses that had to be rebuilt along the way.
As his memories flowed back to him, he remembered the day that dragon racing was unofficially created. It was a peaceful day when Snotlout and the twins got bored and decided to start racing each other. As the races continued, the other teens gradually started to join in, with Hiccup being the last to start racing. After a few accusations of cheating which no one could prove since there were no rules at the time, they created rules for the races, and the sport of dragon racing was born.
Hiccup and the beast under him won the game... again. But the crowd cheered as they always did, a cacophony of applause and shouted compliments. It made the rider smile.
This is Berk, he thought. The only place on earth where people and dragons coexist. People here call me a hero, but I just did what I thought was best for my friend. No one could predict what happened next. This new world was created. It's beautiful. The dragons have helped to build Berk. We are further progressed in the world than any other tribe in the archipelago. Plus, the dragons are a great defense. Yep, dragons are truly a gift from the gods.
Astrid landed beside him in a blur of blue and yellow, finishing in second. A thud from her dragon touching the ground finally snapped Hiccup out of his thoughts and submerged him back into reality. She scowled at him. Hiccup shook his head and laughed good-naturedly; she never liked it when he – or anyone else – beat her.
“Hello, milady,” he chuckled, unable to keep his mouth straight. Despite herself, Astrid allowed a small smile creep onto her face. Relief swept through Hiccup; perhaps he wouldn't get lectured on how unfair it was to ride on a Night Fury in dragon races. To be fair, though, Night Furies weren't supposed to be in the game, but Astrid could be slightly... persuasive, at times. The only reason Hiccup and Toothless were even allowed to race were thanks to her.
“One of these days, Hiccup,” she said. She tried to sound threatening, but her smile betrayed her. Hiccup laughed and Astrid followed suit.
Snotlout came up from behind them, clenching the horns of his Monstrous Nightmare tightly. His facial expression was a mixture of disappointment and frustration, having only snatched a third.
"Hey Snotlout," Hiccup called, in an attempt to sound as friendly as possible. "Have you seen the others?"
Snotlout's countenance improved and he turned, pointing behind him. "Eh, they're catching up. Slowpokes," he muttered with a hint of pride. His dragon puffed out his chest and closed his eyes, emulating Snotlout's boastful pose.
Hiccup grinned, shaking his head at the Nightmare's imitation.
"What are you smiling for?" Snotlout complained, frowning. "Wipe that silly grin from your face, or else -"
"Dragon riders, coming through!" Tuffnut yelled, zipping towards them with glee.
"Get out of the way, Snotty!" Ruffnut cried. "You're blocking our entry!"
Snotlout snapped his head around in surprise. "Hookfang, let's go." Hookfang snorted and ignored him completely. "Hookfang, I'm going to get hurt!" he pleaded anxiously. The Nightmare clacked its razor-sharp teeth together, avoiding his rider's eyes.
Snotlout yanked on Hookfang’s horns, glancing backwards at the incoming Zippleback. Where they purposely heading for him?
Just as Snotlout thought the green dragon was about to clobber him and his dragon into a pulp on the rocks below, Hookfang ducked, diving out of the twins way.
No idea the word count since goggle docs doesn't say..
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draconicwyvern
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28 May 2014, 22:42
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kyt, 18, she/her.
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It should be in Tools... or Ctrl + Shift + C. B-)
785, I think.
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TokiMudkip
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28 May 2014, 23:23
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Yes, it's in Tools, I know since I write in Google Docs
It shows both total word count and the current selection's word count at the same time
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I'm actually MudkipStar.
If I explode, don't be alarmed... I seem to be exploding a lot today...
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TokiMudkip
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28 May 2014, 23:24
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Oops wrong account I'm so sorry, was checking poll results XD
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I'm actually MudkipStar.
If I explode, don't be alarmed... I seem to be exploding a lot today...
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draconicwyvern
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04 Jun 2014, 18:16
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kyt, 18, she/her.
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Spoiler: click to toggle
It's been a few years since the battle with the Red Death, and since then life on Berk had been thriving. The inhabitants of the island were no longer worried of a dragon raid, but were now waiting with anticipation for the dragon racing to begin.
Hiccup was racing with his friends, happy and feeling like nothing could possibly ruin his mood. He clicked the tail fin, and Toothless banked sharply, swerving around Fishlegs and Meatlug as he slowly took the lead. As Night Furies were the fastest dragons and Hiccup was the best rider, they always started behind the others - but that didn't stop them from winning almost every time, much to Astrid's disappointment, though seeing him happy, it was hard to be mad at him.
As he and Toothless streaked through the air, passing the others and gradually taking the lead, Hiccup thought back to what had happened over the past few years. It had been two or three years since the fall of the Red Death at the hands of Hiccup and Toothless, and although it had happened slowly, dragons had found their niche in Berk's society - although admittedly there were a few houses that had to be rebuilt along the way.
As his memories flowed back to him, he remembered the day that dragon racing was unofficially created. It was a peaceful day when Snotlout and the twins got bored and decided to start racing each other. As the races continued, the other teens gradually started to join in, with Hiccup being the last to start racing. After a few accusations of cheating which no one could prove since there were no rules at the time, they created rules for the races, and the sport of dragon racing was born.
Hiccup and the beast under him won the game... again. But the crowd cheered as they always did, a cacophony of applause and shouted compliments. It made the rider smile.
This is Berk, he thought. The only place on earth where people and dragons coexist. People here call me a hero, but I just did what I thought was best for my friend. No one could predict what happened next. This new world was created. It's beautiful. The dragons have helped to build Berk. We are further progressed in the world than any other tribe in the archipelago. Plus, the dragons are a great defense. Yep, dragons are truly a gift from the gods.
Astrid landed beside him in a blur of blue and yellow, finishing in second. A thud from her dragon touching the ground finally snapped Hiccup out of his thoughts and submerged him back into reality. She scowled at him. Hiccup shook his head and laughed good-naturedly; she never liked it when he – or anyone else – beat her.
“Hello, milady,” he chuckled, unable to keep his mouth straight. Despite herself, Astrid allowed a small smile creep onto her face. Relief swept through Hiccup; perhaps he wouldn't get lectured on how unfair it was to ride on a Night Fury in dragon races. To be fair, though, Night Furies weren't supposed to be in the game, but Astrid could be slightly... persuasive, at times. The only reason Hiccup and Toothless were even allowed to race were thanks to her.
“One of these days, Hiccup,” she said. She tried to sound threatening, but her smile betrayed her. Hiccup laughed and Astrid followed suit.
Snotlout came up from behind them, clenching the horns of his Monstrous Nightmare tightly. His facial expression was a mixture of disappointment and frustration, having only snatched a third.
"Hey Snotlout," Hiccup called, in an attempt to sound as friendly as possible. "Have you seen the others?"
Snotlout's countenance improved and he turned, pointing behind him. "Eh, they're catching up. Slowpokes," he muttered with a hint of pride. His dragon puffed out his chest and closed his eyes, emulating Snotlout's boastful pose.
Hiccup grinned, shaking his head at the Nightmare's imitation.
"What are you smiling for?" Snotlout complained, frowning. "Wipe that silly grin from your face, or else -"
"Dragon riders, coming through!" Tuffnut yelled, zipping towards them with glee.
"Get out of the way, Snotty!" Ruffnut cried. "You're blocking our entry!"
Snotlout snapped his head around in surprise. "Hookfang, let's go." Hookfang snorted and ignored him completely. "Hookfang, I'm going to get hurt!" he pleaded anxiously. The Nightmare clacked its razor-sharp teeth together, avoiding his rider's eyes.
Snotlout yanked on Hookfang’s horns, glancing backwards at the incoming Zippleback. Were they purposely heading for him?
Just as Snotlout thought the green dragon was about to clobber him and his dragon into a pulp on the rocks below, Hookfang ducked, diving out of the twins' way with barely a breadth to spare. The momentum threw them off the race course and towards the grass clumps shooting out of the soil behind them.They skidded on the grass, staining Hookfang's claws with green as the dragon fought the force of gravity. It was no use, and they toppled over.
Hiccup rushed over to the writhing mass underneath the Nightmare. "Uhh, Snotlout? You okay?"
Snotlout's head emerged, spitting out blades of grass and dirt. He wiped his mouth and face, streaks of chestnut still painted on his chin. "Do you think I look okay?"
There was a bluish-purple bruise blooming on his cheek. His hair was unruly and looked like a rat's nest. He certainly did not look okay.
"Okay, fine," Hiccup raised his lanky arms up in mock surrender, "I take that back." Snotlout was being temperamental, as usual. Hiccup didn't insult him even the tiniest bit; he was just a tad worried about his friend's well-being! It wasn't his fault if his act of kindness was acknowledged as a jeer.
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