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Grief post sequel story.
Topic Started: 12 Jul 2014, 03:08 (5504 Views)
Rocky Rose
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BerserkDragon
12 Jul 2014, 06:52
When I read that I just thought "Johann you idiot" XD

Awesome story!
Thanks :)

To be honest- I m going with the idea that he was away for a long long time and the events of the sequel happened... then again.. Johann is an interesting character to attempt to write lol.. :P
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Rocky Rose
12 Jul 2014, 07:08
BerserkDragon
12 Jul 2014, 06:52
When I read that I just thought "Johann you idiot" XD

Awesome story!
Thanks :)

To be honest- I m going with the idea that he was away for a long long time and the events of the sequel happened... then again.. Johann is an interesting character to attempt to write lol.. :P
Nice idea 8) :D
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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I'm on a roll :D a bit of Hiccstrid for ya'll :D
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"With Vikings on the backs of dragons, the world just got a whole lot bigger."


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This is going along great!

For the blank, I suggest urged/sighed/soothed/whispered/comforted; though it really depends if she's comforting him, or urging him to do something.

Also [personally I don't like to correct typos for other's stories, makes me feel uncomfortable, but -_- ]
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Nice work!
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13 Jul 2014, 15:30
This is going along great!

For the blank, I suggest urged/sighed/soothed/whispered/comforted; though it really depends if she's comforting him, or urging him to do something.

Also [personally I don't like to correct typos for other's stories, makes me feel uncomfortable, but -_- ]
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Nice work!
Think I meant that, I'm just being lazy since sometimes... it depends on how I feel when it comes to editing... and since this story is technically a WIP... some editing will probably wait til the end right before I post it on other sites... and some will come just as I'm writing... :P

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"With Vikings on the backs of dragons, the world just got a whole lot bigger."


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AAAND!! :D I FINALLY HAVE an intro :D : D*happy dance* and because it's not... majorly spoilery if someone were to just randomly read this small part... :P quote tags instead of spoiler tags :O
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Hiccup

This is Berk, where the Vikings are as tough as the hard rock this town is built on. The winters here are long and full of snow. The days can be darker then a moonless night, and colder then a bewilderbeast’s breath.

I gazed at the town from the front of our house. Barely anyone was awake at this time of morning. The brisk morning air nipped at my fingers. 


“Are ya ready bud?” I grinned at Toothless beside me.
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"With Vikings on the backs of dragons, the world just got a whole lot bigger."


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This story sounds awesome :D
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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It does indeed. :D
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Thanks guys :D

now.. for some dreams... :O :hiccup: :stoick:
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"With Vikings on the backs of dragons, the world just got a whole lot bigger."


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Just a real quick announcement.. I'm not gonna update until after the 17th because that weekend is the show and I REALLY have to get to concentrating on the lines.. (it's actually the hardest part for me..) I do Have more scenes but I want to wait til I can start to give Dragons my attention more.. :P Right Toothless?? :X
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