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Topic Started: 21 Jun 2014, 06:05 (21437 Views)
Toothless123
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Yep. :D
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Update: Might be a short one, it depends if the pop-ups are feeling merciful. :D
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"Drago, can I go for a walk?'
He considered this.
"Fine, boy.'
He turned to his dragons.
"Go with him, in case he tries to run off.'
"Oh, Drago, don't be stupid, of course I wouldn't try to run off-'
"I'm not taking any chances...'
I nodded, and started to run off.
"Now that he's gone, I can start to train you.' he said to the Bewilderbeast.
"Just do what I say, and you won't get hurt...'
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"Remember, boy, one mistake, and we're taking you back.' a Deadly Nadder snarled.
'Master won't be pleased if you try to run off... And I should know...'
The dragon whimpered, it seemed, in pain.
"What is it?'
"Nothing!' it snapped- but reluctantly moved its body, and showed me a jagged, red, bleeding scar.
"Master gave me that. He pulled one of the spikes out of my tail, and stabbed it into my scales. "This is what happens if you try to run away from me." he said."
For a second, I could see sadness in those golden eyes.
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Awesome!

(what pop-ups? XD)
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Sometimes ads come up on my computer, and replace the webpage I'm on...
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Aww I hope he becomes friends with the nadder :D
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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22 Jun 2014, 07:55
Aww I hope he becomes friends with the nadder :D
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22 Jun 2014, 06:51
Sometimes ads come up on my computer, and replace the webpage I'm on...
Ahh. I get those too, from a site called like adsdelivery1 or something. I probably got it from downloading something, and they appear all over the page. I'm trying to get rid of them, but in the meantime I've installed an adblock extension on Chrome and Firefox, so they block off the ads for me :)
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22 Jun 2014, 12:32
Toothless123
22 Jun 2014, 06:51
Sometimes ads come up on my computer, and replace the webpage I'm on...
Ahh. I get those too, from a site called like adsdelivery1 or something. I probably got it from downloading something, and they appear all over the page. I'm trying to get rid of them, but in the meantime I've installed an adblock extension on Chrome and Firefox, so they block off the ads for me :)
Maybe I should install an adblock extension too... I'll have a look for one, and then I'll update the story! :D
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I've installed one, so the pop-ups should be merciful now... :D
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Chapter 14 (I think)
 
As you can tell, I've changed the layout a bit. I'll edit the other chapters with the same layout soon!
"Does it hurt?' I asked the Nadder.
"No...' he lied.
"What's your name?'
"Well, I don't really have one... I'm just "dragon" or "beast" to Master.'
"I could give you a name...?' I offered.
The Nadder didn't say anything, so I guess he meant yes.
"How about... Aldin?'
The dragon squawked in surprise.
"You... you know Dragonese?' he gasped.
"Well... yes. My father taught me a bit before...' I trailed off.
"It's quite surprising, actually... Nobody really speaks Dragonese anymore. They just yell at us, especially Master. And I know how it feels to not have your parents around...'
"What happened?' I asked, and then mentally kicked myself.
"Master killed my parents...'
"Oh...'
"You're lucky, boy. At least your father's not dead...yet... Master could find him, and kill him... Or the other dragons could...' he wasn't saying this in a nasty way; just saying what could happen.
"We would have no trouble at all killing your father... Unlike the Nadder...' a Zippleback hissed.
'Why did he even capture you anyway? You couldn't even kill him-' the left head of the Zippleback lunged at me with an evil grin. '-let alone his father.'
Aldin said nothing.
"And the dragon riders aren't coming to save us, even if there were any still alive, Master would have killed them already. He hates them...'
"There's nothing wrong with dreams!' Aldin shouted.
"This "Dragon Conqueror" isn't even one year old yet! And how can he ride a Night Fury?! Only Master can ride a Night Fury! How can he save us?! We don't need saving!"
"You'll see, Geyol, you'll see..." Aldin said, mysteriously.
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