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Topic Started: 26 May 2014, 21:16 (29219 Views)
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MudkipStar
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26 May 2014, 21:16
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- MC_Oceans
- 27 May 2014, 01:15
Should I post what I have so far?
absolutely
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hi im réka
im developing a mildly unhealthy obsession with obiwan kenobi (more like obiwan kenoBAE am i right)
my personal tumblr is ninja-stop
im also writing a fantasy/humor novel called RESET which i won nanowrimo 2015 with i have a writing tumblr for it if you wanna check that out
yeah thats it this probably isnt what should go in a signature but w/e
i have 2 pet buns
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Shnuckles
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26 May 2014, 21:17
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- MC_Oceans
- 27 May 2014, 01:15
Should I post what I have so far?
yeah, under a spoiler bar, though, so it won't clutter things more than they already are 
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Shnuckles
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26 May 2014, 21:19
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- MudkipStar
- 27 May 2014, 01:16
- Hope_and_Heir
- 27 May 2014, 01:13
Wait, I wanna see what particular genre people are good at writing in…? Then I'll base my ideas of of that.
I like to write happier things, often fluff. Humor almost always slips into my fics (I never consciously try to write it in, but it's almost always there), and sections of my current fic are my first attempts at some things like a bit of romance, one scene that's a bit darker than usual (Toothless brooding a bit over the loss of his fin and his enslavement by the Red Death). I've never tried to write anything dark or angsty but it's really not my style.
Hope this helps
The beginning chapters will be happier ones, if you want to help us out on those maybe MC oceans can send you the chapter once he's done working on it...
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Dan_Oceans
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26 May 2014, 21:20
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What do I put here again?
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What I have so far. 127 words Hiccup has had a few problems with his life, but they seem to have vanished now. He was happily racing with his friends and nothing could've ruined his mood. As he and Toothless swerved around his friends and slowly but surely got in front of them all, he thought back to what had happened over the past two to three years. After he had defeated the Red Death, dragons had slowly found their niche in Berk. Granted they had to rebuild a few houses along the way.
Dragon racing was unofficially created when Snotlout and the twins got bored and started racing each other and others soon started joining them with Hiccup being the last. They added rules so nobody could say someone cheated without knowing how.
What's funny is I almost posted a url for an account confirmation
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"can you hear the birds sing? saying go the f*** to sleep (to the sound of les mis)"
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MudkipStar
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26 May 2014, 21:21
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I'm also not very good at writing human canon characters. I get very worried about them not being in character enough 
but I can write from a dragon's POV or a human OC's if we have any human OC's
or I can try to write a canon one and in editing (which I still think we should all do together) we can make it better
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hi im réka
im developing a mildly unhealthy obsession with obiwan kenobi (more like obiwan kenoBAE am i right)
my personal tumblr is ninja-stop
im also writing a fantasy/humor novel called RESET which i won nanowrimo 2015 with i have a writing tumblr for it if you wanna check that out
yeah thats it this probably isnt what should go in a signature but w/e
i have 2 pet buns
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MudkipStar
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26 May 2014, 21:22
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im just kinda here well occasionally
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OOH OOH CAN I TRY AND EXPAND IT WITHOUT MAKING ANYTHING ELSE HAPPEN BEYOND WHAT YOU'VE WRITTEN ALREADY
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hi im réka
im developing a mildly unhealthy obsession with obiwan kenobi (more like obiwan kenoBAE am i right)
my personal tumblr is ninja-stop
im also writing a fantasy/humor novel called RESET which i won nanowrimo 2015 with i have a writing tumblr for it if you wanna check that out
yeah thats it this probably isnt what should go in a signature but w/e
i have 2 pet buns
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Dan_Oceans
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26 May 2014, 21:22
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What do I put here again?
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I say go ahead.
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"can you hear the birds sing? saying go the f*** to sleep (to the sound of les mis)"
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Shnuckles
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26 May 2014, 21:28
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- 27 May 2014, 01:20
What I have so far. 127 words Hiccup has had a few problems with his life, but they seem to have vanished now. He was happily racing with his friends and nothing could've ruined his mood. As he and Toothless swerved around his friends and slowly but surely got in front of them all, he thought back to what had happened over the past two to three years. After he had defeated the Red Death, dragons had slowly found their niche in Berk. Granted they had to rebuild a few houses along the way.
Dragon racing was unofficially created when Snotlout and the twins got bored and started racing each other and others soon started joining them with Hiccup being the last. They added rules so nobody could say someone cheated without knowing how.
What's funny is I almost posted a url for an account confirmation
Pretty good so far, but I think you could add some more detail. Like this...
Spoiler: click to toggle It's been a few years since the battle with the Red Death, and since then life on Berk had been thriving. The inhabitants of the island were no longer worried of a dragon raid, but were now waiting with anticipation for the dragon racing to begin.
Hiccup has had a few problems with his life, but they seem to have vanished now. He was happily racing with his friends and nothing could have ruined his mood. As he and Toothless swerved around his friends, shooting them smirks as he did so, the two slowly, but surely got, in front of them all. And, you could be sure, that once got there, no one was going to pass him again, much to Astrid's regret.
Hiccup thought back to what had happened over the past two to three years. After he had defeated the Red Death, dragons had slowly found their niche in Berk. Granted they had to rebuild a few houses along the way, but life improve once the dragon, and some of the humans, had been trained.
Dragon racing was unofficially created when Snotlout and the twins got bored, they started racing each other through the village and others soon started joining them, with Hiccup being the last. They added rules so nobody could say someone cheated without knowing how; Snotlout and the twins often argued over who beat whom.
EDIT: Hey, peoples, It's actually getting a little late for me. you guys can keep brainstorming and writing, I might not be on to much for the next couple hours - I'll be sleeping - but I might pop on every now and then!
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Dan_Oceans
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26 May 2014, 21:32
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What do I put here again?
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just fixed a couple gramatical error I saw right away It's been a few years since the battle with the Red Death, and since then life on Berk had been thriving. The inhabitants of the island were no longer worried of a dragon raid, but were now waiting with anticipation for the dragon racing to begin.
Hiccup has had a few problems with his life, but they seem to have vanished now. He was happily racing with his friends and nothing could have ruined his mood. As he and Toothless swerved around his friends, shooting them smirks as he did so, the two slowly, but surely got in front of them all. And, you could be sure, that once he got there, no one was going to pass him again, much to Astrid's regret.
Hiccup thought back to what had happened over the past two to three years. After he had defeated the Red Death, dragons had slowly found their niche in Berk. Granted they had to rebuild a few houses along the way, but life improve once the dragons, and some of the humans, had been trained.
Dragon racing was unofficially created when Snotlout and the twins got bored, they started racing each other through the village and others soon started joining them, with Hiccup being the last. They added rules so nobody could say someone cheated without knowing how; Snotlout and the twins often argued over who beat whom.
have fun
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MudkipStar
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26 May 2014, 21:32
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Original version Hiccup has had a few problems with his life, but they seem to have vanished now. He was happily racing with his friends and nothing could've ruined his mood. As he and Toothless swerved around his friends and slowly but surely got in front of them all, he thought back to what had happened over the past two to three years. After he had defeated the Red Death, dragons had slowly found their niche in Berk. Granted they had to rebuild a few houses along the way.
Dragon racing was unofficially created when Snotlout and the twins got bored and started racing each other and others soon started joining them with Hiccup being the last. They added rules so nobody could say someone cheated without knowing how.
My version which ended up being longer than I thought it would Hiccup's life hasn't exactly always been great. Things have definitely gotten better, though, as he's helped dragons become a part of the Viking society and proved to said society that he's not useless after all.
Hiccup was racing with his friends, happy and feeling like nothing could possibly ruin his mood. He clicks the tail fin, and Toothless banks sharply, swerving around Fishlegs and Meatlug as he slowly took the lead. As Night Furies were the fastest dragons and Hiccup was the best rider, they always started behind the others - but that didn't stop them from winning almost every time.
As he and Toothless streaked through the air, passing the others and gradually taking the lead, Hiccup thought back to what had happened over the past few years. It had been two or three years since the fall of the Red Death at the hands of Hiccup and Toothless, and although it had happened slowly, dragons had found their niche in Berk's society - although admittedly there were a few houses that had to be rebuilt along the way.
As he thought back, he remembered the day that dragon racing was unofficially created when Snotlout and the twins got bored and decided to start racing each other. As the races continued, the other teens gradually started to join in, with Hiccup being the last to start racing. After a few accusations of cheating which no one could prove since there were no rules, they created rules for the races, and the sport of dragon racing was born.
We don't have to use that if you don't want to, I just wanted to see how much I could expand it 
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hi im réka
im developing a mildly unhealthy obsession with obiwan kenobi (more like obiwan kenoBAE am i right)
my personal tumblr is ninja-stop
im also writing a fantasy/humor novel called RESET which i won nanowrimo 2015 with i have a writing tumblr for it if you wanna check that out
yeah thats it this probably isnt what should go in a signature but w/e
i have 2 pet buns
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