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Topic Started: 02 Aug 2014, 14:38 (21587 Views)
BerserkDragon
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I have an idea on how Savage will "affect" the island to begin with, but I'm not sure on how he'll actually attack.

So until I get any ideas on his attack plan I took a map of Berk from the film and added colours:



Seen as Berk is about as big as your average English town (English towns are still pretty big), I figured that the Hooligan village must take up not much less than half of it. I'm guessing it could be where I put the green circle because it's next to where could be a good docking area (the blue line). It's practical for boats because it's a wide, open area of water but it also leans inside the island a bit, and that could help towards blocking waves that could damage boats (it wouldn't block many waves seen as it's only a little indented but it could stop some rough ones coming from the east or west).
This means that any activity on Berk will be mostly to the north, because that's where the village and dock are.
So I figured that the little islands at the south of the island could be practical hiding spots for enemies, because they wouldn't be checked often.

This is all based on guesses, so if anyone has any true facts, please tell me!
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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Wow! Great analysis! :D
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Thanks :D

Chapter 9 is out 8)
It's a bit short, but since the announcement of Berk going under siege, I've been getting more ideas for how the story can continue, so the chapters should get longer :)
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I'm trying to make it as realistic as possible when it comes to battle arrangements and fortifications and stuff... what do you think? :$
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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03 Aug 2014, 09:23
I saw a small, fluttering shape moving towards me. It was silhouetted because of the sun so I couldn't make out what it was until it came closer.
As it approached, I saw that it was a Terrible Terror, and that something was attached to its leg.
It landed in front of me, clearly out of breath from its flight. I gently picked it up and took the paper off its leg. The woods scribbled on it in charcoal sent a shiver down my spine:
It's time.
You 'adapted' that from Fireproof, didn't you? :P Don't worry, I'm not mad. :P
Great! :D I would have commented sooner, but my family and I were leaving to go to Folkestone at the time you posted the chapter! :D

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Toothless123
04 Aug 2014, 07:35
BerserkDragon
03 Aug 2014, 09:23
I saw a small, fluttering shape moving towards me. It was silhouetted because of the sun so I couldn't make out what it was until it came closer.
As it approached, I saw that it was a Terrible Terror, and that something was attached to its leg.
It landed in front of me, clearly out of breath from its flight. I gently picked it up and took the paper off its leg. The woods scribbled on it in charcoal sent a shiver down my spine:
It's time.
You 'adapted' that from Fireproof, didn't you? :P Don't worry, I'm not mad. :P
Great! :D I would have commented sooner, but my family and I were leaving to go to Folkestone at the time you posted the chapter! :D
Yeah, Terrible Terrors make great messengers :D
No problem ;)
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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BerserkDragon
04 Aug 2014, 19:41
Toothless123
04 Aug 2014, 07:35
BerserkDragon
03 Aug 2014, 09:23
I saw a small, fluttering shape moving towards me. It was silhouetted because of the sun so I couldn't make out what it was until it came closer.
As it approached, I saw that it was a Terrible Terror, and that something was attached to its leg.
It landed in front of me, clearly out of breath from its flight. I gently picked it up and took the paper off its leg. The woods scribbled on it in charcoal sent a shiver down my spine:
It's time.
You 'adapted' that from Fireproof, didn't you? :P Don't worry, I'm not mad. :P
Great! :D I would have commented sooner, but my family and I were leaving to go to Folkestone at the time you posted the chapter! :D
Yeah, Terrible Terrors make great messengers :D
No problem ;)
:D

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Super short, just three sentences, but it's especially done to make you itch for chapter 11! XD
Chapter 10
WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN?!

I'm really proud of the idea I got for his first attack :D I'm pretty sure it's never been used before, but then again, there are thousands of fanfics out there. Oh well, it's still pretty epic :D

I just hope you enjoy it as much as I hope you will :D
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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Found one mistake. :D
BerserkDragon
12 Aug 2014, 20:13
I thought I was doing the write things.
Was that supposed to be a pun? :P
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Toothless123
12 Aug 2014, 21:21
Found one mistake. :D
BerserkDragon
12 Aug 2014, 20:13
I thought I was doing the write things.
Was that supposed to be a pun? :P
LOL was I drunk when I wrote this?! XD Just kidding, I'm way too young XD thanks for telling me about it! :D
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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Heart of a Chief, Chapter 11
Remember to tell me if I've made any typos! :)
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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