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Vengeance (Completed)
Topic Started: 23 May 2014, 15:48 (3177 Views)
HideousZippleback
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~Reserving~


More will be posted when I finish my story but for now here's a sample:

Drago had heard of the nest of highly prized dragons from a pirate but he had never imagined it would be this hard to find the nest. Sighing exhaustively, the large man plopped to the ground brushing strands of his dread-locked hair out of his face.

Damn pirate… He must have lied to me. Narrowing his eyes grumpily, the large man stood up slowly, looking towards the way he had come up the large mountain. With a shrug of his shoulders Drago looked up at the top of the mountain one last time, lowering his favored bullhook to his side with a tired sigh.

No dragons...Wait… Drago narrowed his eyes, pulling out a small spyglass as he noticed something small and black flit far above him in the sky. Got you.


By the way after I finish I'm going to post it on FF.net and I would like it if you guys would review on FF.et (when it's finished) than on here as much. Thanks!
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draconicwyvern
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kyt, 18, she/her.

A great start, it looks like it's going to progress into something fantastic :)

(btw what is your username on FF.net? I would like to check out your profile ;) )
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im just kinda here well occasionally

Interesting start, can't wait to see more ^.^
hi im réka
im developing a mildly unhealthy obsession with obiwan kenobi (more like obiwan kenoBAE am i right)
my personal tumblr is ninja-stop
im also writing a fantasy/humor novel called RESET which i won nanowrimo 2015 with i have a writing tumblr for it if you wanna check that out
yeah thats it this probably isnt what should go in a signature but w/e
i have 2 pet buns
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cometotheberkside
23 May 2014, 21:20
A great start, it looks like it's going to progress into something fantastic :)

(btw what is your username on FF.net? I would like to check out your profile ;) )

Thanks! https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5228536/HideousZippleback
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Updated! Not finished...

Drago had heard of the nest of highly prized dragons from a pirate but he had never imagined it would be this hard to find the nest. Sighing exhaustively, the large man plopped to the ground brushing strands of his dread-locked hair out of his face.

Damn pirate… He must have lied to me. Narrowing his eyes grumpily, the large man stood up slowly, looking towards the way he had come up the large mountain. With a shrug of his shoulders Drago looked up at the top of the mountain one last time, lowering his favored bullhook to his side with a tired sigh.

No dragons...Wait… Drago narrowed his eyes, pulling out a small spyglass as he noticed something small and black flit far above him in the sky. Got you.

Drago smiled evilly as he followed the dragon’s path of flight quietly, leaping over small boulders and trees swiftly, hoping he could keep the dragon in his gaze.

Drago chased the dragon for what seemed like an hour, and then with a sudden screech the dragon disappeared behind a large outcropping in the mountain.

“No!” he howled angrily, smashing his fist into a small aspen tree, which splintered under his fist.

How could I lose the damned dragon? Drago growled angrily, furious that he had let the dragon slip away from him. A loud roar stopped his thoughts and he looked up too see another, far larger black dragon take off from the outcropping and dive away from the ledge. Drago smiled, pushing himself away from the aspen and watched as the smaller dragon took off after it’s friend--mate?--and disappeared.

Led me right to your nest you little freaks, Drago thought to himself as he headed up a small, nearly hidden trail towards the nest of black dragons.

The mountain echoed an eerie silence as Drago clambered up the mountainside, breathing heavily. Man...only 25 years old and this is...really tiring.

Drago kept climbing as the sun slowly slide down the peaks of the mountains, staining the aspens a rosy-pink color. It looks like blood, Drago thought as he stopped to drink from a water flask coated with Scauldron scales. Gulping down the last few drops of water from his water pouch, Drago continued the laborious climb to the dragon’s nest.

By the time Drago had reached the outcropping the sun had sunk all the way below the mountains and the moon was just barely peeking from the clouded skies, reflecting off of the outcropping enough so Drago could see a small ledge he could climb up.

Hooking the twisted edge of his bullhook into a small hole in the lip of the outcropping, and with a strained groan he pulled himself up onto the outcropping. Looking around quickly, Drago was relieved when he realized that neither of the parent dragons were there.

Where’s the nest? Drago wondered as he searched around the rocky nesting area, anger quickly starting to bubble in his stomach as he noticed not a single dragon egg or hatchling laying around for him to snatch.

Stomping his feet on the ledge, body shaking almost convulsively, Drago roared his rage to the stars. “You lied! There is no Night Fury hatchlings around here, and when I get my hands on you, you filthy lying pirate, you will wish you had never been born!”

A small peep stopped Drago’s fit of rage as he turned towards the creator of the sound. It was a small, obviously just barely hatched out of it’s egg, Night Fury, green eyes sparking with curiosity.

“Night Fury…” Drago whispered, shock apparent in his face as he bent down to get a better look at the baby Night Fury. It’s small wings opened as the baby drago peeped at Drago again, walking towards him slowly.

“You dumb dragon…” Drago said quietly as he snatched up the baby Night Fury in his hand, pulling at it’s small neck roughly. The small Night Fury’s mouth opened, a pitiful cry squeaking from it’s body.

“Whine all you want little dragon, mommy ain’t coming back to help you. Ever,” Drago said, raising the curved edge of his bullhook to the hatchling’s neck, digging a small, yet deep, cut into it’s neck.

“HAHAHA! Cry and scream all you want nothing--” A sudden roar, filled with malice beyond any Drago had ever heard before, interrupted Drago’s triumphant speech. Whipping around Drago’s eyes widened as he took in the sight of two large black missile-like shapes rocketing towards him.

“Oh damn…” Drago whispered, throwing the hatchling away from hm to free up his other hand, and with an animalistic roar threw his bullhook at the larger Night Fury. The black dragon rolled, dodging the weapon, and with a snap of her mouth grabbed the weapon.

“No! Give that back!” Drago howled, lunging at the female, wrapping his large hands around the handle of his weapon. The forest green eyes of the dragon narrowed dangerously as she twisted her head and threw the weapon, and Drago, away from her.

Stars spun in Drago’s gaze for a second as he slowly got up, shaking his head in an attempt to clear the stars from his mind. Placing his hand on the edge of the outcropping, Drago slowly stood up. As he lifted his head a huge paw, soot-black in color, raked across his face, forcing him to the ground.

Howls of pain escaped from Drago as he rubbed the blood from his eyes in an attempt to see where the Night Fury that had scarred him was. Noticing a small flicker of movement out of the corner of his eye Drago, hand wrapped around his bullhook, lunged towards the creature. The scream of pain coming from the Fury enticed Drago to stab his bullhook deeper into the dragon.

Drago could feel the talons of the dragon digging into his arm, but he ignored the pain instead shoving the dragon to the ground forcefully.

“Goodbye filthy creature…” he whispered as he ripped the bullhook out of the smll Night Fury’s body and rammed it into his eye. The male Night Fury wheezed painfully, hissing hatefully at Drago as his forest eye simmered out into nothingness.

Drago laughed cruelly, eyes skimming over the still creature, wings slowly rustling in the breeze. “You are no ma--” Drago was interrupted as something huge smashed into him, shoving him to the ground so forcefully he could barely move.
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im just kinda here well occasionally

All I can think right now is "ERMEHGERD BABY NIGHT FURY SO ADORABLE"
hi im réka
im developing a mildly unhealthy obsession with obiwan kenobi (more like obiwan kenoBAE am i right)
my personal tumblr is ninja-stop
im also writing a fantasy/humor novel called RESET which i won nanowrimo 2015 with i have a writing tumblr for it if you wanna check that out
yeah thats it this probably isnt what should go in a signature but w/e
i have 2 pet buns
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Here is the finsihed story on FF.net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10380712/1/Vengeance
(Review if you would like).

And here is the entire story in a spoiler tag.
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draconicwyvern
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kyt, 18, she/her.

That was great! Detail, plot, everything :)
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cometotheberkside
26 May 2014, 22:19
That was great! Detail, plot, everything :)
Thanks! I'm just getting to reading everyone's else stories now (I was out camping yesterday so i couldn't).

Glad you like it!
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That was awesome! :3
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