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Whitefang
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twelve days north of hopeless

So this is just a little thing I wrote last night to practice using different tenses while writing. Don't read it if you haven't seen How to Train Your Dragon 2 or know what happens.
This takes place during the scene accompanied by "Battle of the Bewilderbeast".
Its from the white Bewilderbeast's point of view. If there's anything I should change, please tell me- comments and constructive criticism are always encouraged.
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well, that's all. First story I post on here so I'm hoping it's okay :D
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BerserkDragon
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antisocial british nerd with a youtube channel

That's really good! :D Will you post other fanfics too?
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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draconicwyvern
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It's beautiful. Great use of description. Haven't found anything to correct, really, except for a small unintentional typo (...Raincutter out of ots trap).
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BerserkDragon
23 Jul 2014, 08:57
That's really good! :D Will you post other fanfics too?
Sure, at the moment I only have one more that I'm currently proofreading... thanks so much :D
cometotheberkside
23 Jul 2014, 11:38
It's beautiful. Great use of description. Haven't found anything to correct, really, except for a small unintentional typo (...Raincutter out of ots trap).
Thanks! I'll fix it right away- I typed it up on my iPad mini so I figured there'd be typos >.<
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