Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Readers! What was your favourite chapter (I'm curious)
1 1 (11%)
2 0 (0%)
3 0 (0%)
4 2 (22%)
5 1 (11%)
6 0 (0%)
7 0 (0%)
8 0 (0%)
9 2 (22%)
10 3 (33%)

How I lived before (my first fanfiction :3)
Topic Started: 12 Apr 2014, 10:51 (15453 Views)
AuroraBorealis
User avatar
Monstrous Nightmare

Great story! ^_^ If you want, here's an idea, you could do young Hiccup's point of view.
What should I write on my signature? Hmm...
I am a Httyd, Gravity Falls and Portal (One and two) fan.
I'm also a bookworm and an introvert.
That was pretty random, but that's me summed up in two sentences.
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
Night fury fire
User avatar

[b]
[color=blue]We're fangirls! It's an occupational hazard...
[/color]
[/b]

Thank you aurora
Hiccup won't be in this fanfic but in my next one he will be
Thanks for the advice :)
^_^ ;) :D :$ :P 8) :'( :( ^) :O :blink: >:( <3 <- me seeing httyd 2
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
Night fury fire
User avatar

[b]
[color=blue]We're fangirls! It's an occupational hazard...
[/color]
[/b]

Chapter 4

The next morning. Darkwing woke up next to his mom. "Mom..are you ok?" He asked. Lightly tapping her head. But there was no response. "Mom?" Said darkwing once more. Still... Silence. "Mom!" He shouted lifting up her leg. It fell weakly to the ground. Tears began to fall from darkwings eyes. "N..no" he sobbed. "Moooom!!" He yelled. But he knew by the way she lay there slumped that she was, gone. Big blue tears were falling uncontrollably from darkwings eyes. He walked over to her and nestled in between her two front legs. "Come back" he whimpered

"Silverstar?". Darkwing flinched as he heard a raspy voice call out his mothers name. Darkwing was still lying with his mother. He refused to let her go. An old nadder came to the entrance of the cave. "You ok sliverstar I heard you were injured last ni....." . Then he saw sliverstar lying dead on the cave floor , her baby crying in her arms. "Sliverstar!" He gasped. Darkwing moved out of the way still crying.

"No no no, this is a disaster" moaned the nadder. He looked at darkwing who stared back at him with big tear filled eyes. " who's going to take care of you" he said sadly. "I will father" said a sudden voice. Darkwing looked around. Another nadder was standing at entrance. She was younger then the other one. Her scales were a lavender purple colour and her underbelly and spines were white. "Lillyanna" said the old nadder

The old nadder and lillyanna went outside the cave to talk. " lillyanna I don't think you can take care of that little dragon" he said. "Besides, you have 3 of your own to look after and he is just one more mouth to feed". "His mother is dead, his father is missing" said lillyanna. "And he..is all alone". "This is not about me 'having' to take care of him, it's that I 'want' to take of him. The old nadder sighed. " alright" he said.

Darkwing walked up to the cave entrance and just managed to hear some of the nadders conversation. "Take care of him lillyanna" he heard " for all we know, he might be the last night fury alive". The words pierced his heart like a knife. He had no idea that night furys were so rare. He began to cry again.

"Hey there sweetie" said lillyanna softly looking down at darkwing. " come with me, I'm going to take care of you for a while". Darkwing reluctantly followed her out of the cave. He looked at his mothers body and said "goodbye" for the last time. He followed lillyanna along the beach and up a steep pathway. They walked for a while until they reached a nearby cliff. Lillyanna told darkwing to wait as she jumped down onto a large ledge of rock jutting out from the cliff

2 baby nadders emerged from a small cave. "Mom!, your home shouted one. "Did ya bring fish mom,did ya?"." No scorchbreath I didn't bring fish" laughed lillyanna. "Aww" sighed scorchbreath. "But I do have a surprise". "Yeah!,what is it?" Yelled scorchbreath. "Come on darkwing" said lillyanna. "Don't be shy". Darkwing jumped down. "Sons bet your new brother". "Darkwing these are my sons scorchbreath and spike. Both nadders had white under bellies and spikes. Scorchbreath was blue and spike was green.

"Woah! A night fury!" Yelled spike. "Oh my gods" said scorchbreath. "I heard you guys are faster then lightning!"." Yeah well I heard you can breath giant plasma balls" said spike. Darkwing looked down at the ground awkwardly not knowing what to say." Will you 2 muttonheads stop" said a voice from behind them. A female nadder jumped out from behind. "Ignore those two" she said. " come up to the headland with me". "Oh and I'm Sasha by the way". Darkwing smiled and followed sasha to the headland.

Aww this chapter was sad :(
In chapter 5
Sasha and darkwing become friends and get into great danger
^_^ ;) :D :$ :P 8) :'( :( ^) :O :blink: >:( <3 <- me seeing httyd 2
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
AuroraBorealis
User avatar
Monstrous Nightmare

That was sad, I cried! :( Great work, nonetheless!
What should I write on my signature? Hmm...
I am a Httyd, Gravity Falls and Portal (One and two) fan.
I'm also a bookworm and an introvert.
That was pretty random, but that's me summed up in two sentences.
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
draco
User avatar
mystery dragon, pic drawn by night fury fire. Thank you :)

Great story. Can't wait for the next story.
Dragons, need I say more.

Hiccup, chief of berc, dragon master.
Toothless, alpha dragon.
You and me bud we can do this, as one.
It's just a zipple misunderstanding
I like a pit, but I love a boar pit.
i am hurt,I am very much hurt.
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
Night fury fire
User avatar

[b]
[color=blue]We're fangirls! It's an occupational hazard...
[/color]
[/b]

Thanks so much guys chapter 5 will be coming soon
^_^ ;) :D :$ :P 8) :'( :( ^) :O :blink: >:( <3 <- me seeing httyd 2
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
Night fury fire
User avatar

[b]
[color=blue]We're fangirls! It's an occupational hazard...
[/color]
[/b]

Chapter 5

Sasha and darkwing were sitting at the edge of the headland. Below them was a glorious view of the sea. Sasha had been listening to every word of darkwings story. "So your mom is..."."yeah" interrupted darkwing fearing he would burst into tears again. "Can you remember seeing your dad?" Said sasha. "No" said darkwing. "He left just after I was born". Sasha didn't know what to say. She felt so sorry for poor darkwing.

"Come with me" said sasha. The two dragons once more began to walk. They reached an overgrown forest full of oak trees. As they walked deeper and deeper the forest got darker and darker. But sasha seemed to know what she was doing. Darkwing heard a squeal far off in the distance. "W..what was that" said darkwing nervously. "Boars" said sasha quite casually." Let's go before they pick our scent". Darkwing followed keeping close to sasha.

Sasha lead him to a clearing. A large waterfall gushed its way downwards to a wide river. "Sasha..this place, is beautiful" breathed darkwing. Sasha smiled. "I come here to get way from all the stress in my life" said sasha. "Well mostly just to get away from my brothers". For the first time in what felt like centuries, darkwing laughed. "I thought you would like this place" sasha smiled. "Follow me" she said. She guided darkwing up the wet rocks to a certain spot on the waterfall. Then like magic she was gone. "Sasha?" Said darkwing. " I'm here silly" she said. "Behind the waterfall". "Come on". Darkwing slowly stepped through a hole in the rock

Darkwing found himself in a cave. The walls were wet all around. Gushing water surrounded them. On the ceiling three fireworm dragons were crawling around muttering indistinct words which darkwing could not quite understand. Their glow was illuminating the cave. "What do you think?" Said sasha. "Wow" sighed darkwing. "This is my cave" said sasha pointing to her own footprint on the wall. "Now it belongs to both of us" she said gesturing to a small bed of dirt on the ground.

Darkwing sat admiring his new paw print on the wall. "You are the best friend I ever had" said darkwing to sasha. Sasha smiled. "You are too" she said. "Come on" said sasha. "Let's go fishing in the river". The two dragons happily left the cave

Darkwing had never felt so happy in his life. Despite the fact that they were walking home, soaking wet through a dark and eerie forest. Darkwing for the first time in his life was experiencing friendship. Being an only child, he had never quite understood about friendship. His only friend had been his mother. When she died darkwing had never felt so alone. But being with sasha sent him a clear message ' you are not alone'. And that was what friendship was to him.

Over the next week darkwing and sasha became the best of friends. They spent the days playing away. They went to so many places. And darkwing was having the time of his life.

"Darkwiiing" sang sasha one morning. "Ugh...sasha..what time is it?"groaned darkwing." Time we got going" said sasha. "Bye mom" sasha said. "Were going out to play". "Bye you two" said lillyanna softly who was also sleepy. "Sasha" moaned darkwing. "Why are we going to play so early". "We're not" said sasha with a wild look in her eyes. "I found this really cool place" she said. "Let's go". Darkwing and sasha walked for miles until they reached a rocky area covered in smog. Darkwing recognised it as his old home. "Hell heims gate" he said. "Why did you bring me here". "I didn't bring you here" she replied. "We have further to go. They made their way across treacherous rocks and old viking ship wrecks. Then they reached an island with a massive volcano like mountain. "Sasha...is this the..the". "Yes darkwing " said sasha proudly. "The dragons nest!"

"Sasha are you sure you should be doing this" said darkwing. "Darkwing your suppose to drop food in" murmured sasha, a single mackerel hanging from her mouth. Darkwing looked on in terror. He could hear other dragons in the nest whispering "why is she doing that?!" And "she going to get herself killed!". But Darkwing could do nothing as sasha dropped the mackerel in. It fell down into the deep gassy pit below.

At first nothing happened. Then came an ear splitting roar. A gigantic blue dragon rose from the pit. "Run sasha run!" Yelled darkwing
As the other dragons began to fly away screaming in fear. Sasha and darkwing ran as fast as their legs could carry them!

CLIFFHANGER
Will sasha and darkwing make it out
Find out in chapter 6!
^_^ ;) :D :$ :P 8) :'( :( ^) :O :blink: >:( <3 <- me seeing httyd 2
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
AuroraBorealis
User avatar
Monstrous Nightmare

Great, keep going! :D (Tell me if I'm commenting too much.)
What should I write on my signature? Hmm...
I am a Httyd, Gravity Falls and Portal (One and two) fan.
I'm also a bookworm and an introvert.
That was pretty random, but that's me summed up in two sentences.
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
draco
User avatar
mystery dragon, pic drawn by night fury fire. Thank you :)

Yea, keep going.
Dragons, need I say more.

Hiccup, chief of berc, dragon master.
Toothless, alpha dragon.
You and me bud we can do this, as one.
It's just a zipple misunderstanding
I like a pit, but I love a boar pit.
i am hurt,I am very much hurt.
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
Night fury fire
User avatar

[b]
[color=blue]We're fangirls! It's an occupational hazard...
[/color]
[/b]

Don't worry I will keep going :)
^_^ ;) :D :$ :P 8) :'( :( ^) :O :blink: >:( <3 <- me seeing httyd 2
  PM (offline)     Profile     Quote  
 
Users browsing this forum:
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 49 guests
Print view
Go to Next Page
« Previous Topic · Stories · Next Topic »