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Heart of a Chief
Topic Started: 22 Jul 2014, 03:43 (21582 Views)
BerserkDragon
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I need some assistance...

For chapter 6 I want to switch to Astrid's part of the story but I don't know whether to do it from her POV or 3rd person. Which would be better?
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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I often find it easier to write in third person, but that's just me
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Good going Hiccup ;) considering the... Not soo good circumstances....
"I saw him, and I saw myself."- Hiccup
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BerserkDragon
22 Jul 2014, 07:43
I need some assistance...

For chapter 6 I want to switch to Astrid's part of the story but I don't know whether to do it from her POV or 3rd person. Which would be better?
I go with 1st person a lot... :P but that's my style... :P
"I saw him, and I saw myself."- Hiccup
"With Vikings on the backs of dragons, the world just got a whole lot bigger."


Addicted to DRAGONS :D

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My Tumblr (I'm on there ALOT) Nightfury326
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BerserkDragon
22 Jul 2014, 07:43
I need some assistance...

For chapter 6 I want to switch to Astrid's part of the story but I don't know whether to do it from her POV or 3rd person. Which would be better?
I have read many books, and first/first being one of them. But I feel as if they are slightly harder to switch back and forth (the book I read had the male protagonist's chapters in another colour for easier reading). So I would suggest first/third, to differenciate the POV's.
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Heart of a Chief, chapter 6, part 1!

I'm too tired to finish this chapter tonight so I'll post part 2 tomorrow ;) enjoy!
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Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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I love it so far :)


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22 Jul 2014, 21:16
I love it so far :)
Have you been reading Fireproof lately? This is slightly off-topic, so we can talk about it in a PM if you want. :D
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Last time I posted the first part of Chapter 6...

...now here's the full version! Enjoy! :D
Heart of a Chief, chapter 6
Me? An otaku? Pfff.

Yes I do like dragons if you're wondering. Doesn't seem like it from my profile pic n signature, I know, but I do.

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Chapter Six is well written! Nicely done!
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